Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在多处发音和用词错误，且句子结构混乱，影响表达的自然性和有效性。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免重复和冗余。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy during my free time.

提案: 回答没有直接回答是否学过唱歌，内容不够具体且有语法错误。建议直接回答问题，并补充具体细节，如学习经历或计划。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I wish I could learn it someday because I enjoy music.

提案: 回答表达不清，语法和词汇错误较多，影响理解。建议简洁明了地表达想为谁唱歌及原因，使用正确的句子结构。

例: I want to sing for my parents because they have always supported me and I want to show my gratitude.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误和语法问题，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，清晰表达唱歌及其他艺术形式带来的快乐。

例: Yes, I believe singing and other arts like painting and dancing can bring happiness because they allow people to experience beauty and joy.

× I like steam of course, although I'm not spoilt at sea as my tune is not very good, but I think seeing seeing is a very comfortable thing when I have in my free time because it can make my make me happy.

✓ I like singing of course, although I'm not good at it as my tone is not very good, but I think singing is a very comfortable thing when I have free time because it can make me happy.

这里'steam'和'seeing seeing'是拼写错误，应该是'singing'。动词后面加-ing形式表示喜欢做某事。'make my make me happy'重复，应改为'make me happy'。此外，'spoilt at sea'应为'good at it'，'my tune'应为'my tone'。这些都是动词-ing形式和词汇使用错误。

× When I was very young, my parents let me to learn piano and table tennis, not singing. So I think if I can, I can go back to my childhood. I think I will learn things.

✓ When I was very young, my parents let me learn piano and table tennis, not singing. So I think if I could, I would go back to my childhood. I think I would learn those things.

动词'let'后面不加'to'，应直接接动词原形'learn'。条件句中，表达假设过去应使用虚拟语气，'if I can'应改为'if I could'，'I can go'改为'I would go'。最后一句中，'will'改为'would'更符合假设语气。

× I want to sing for my parents because during my I childhood or even when I was just my mother always seen some beautiful songs beside me. If I can sing well, I think I want to sing for them.

✓ I want to sing for my parents because during my childhood, or even when I was young, my mother always sang some beautiful songs beside me. If I can sing well, I think I want to sing for them.

句中' during my I childhood'多余'I'，应删除。'my mother always seen some beautiful songs'中'seen'用错，应该用'sang'，因为是过去时态。'beside me'用法不当，改为'for me'更合适。

× Yes, I think not only seeing and some other art such as painting, dancing can always bring happiness to people because such beautiful all arts could give people a feeling of beauty.

✓ Yes, I think not only singing but also some other arts such as painting and dancing can always bring happiness to people because all these beautiful arts can give people a feeling of beauty.

'seeing'应为'singing'，'not only... and...'结构错误，应为'not only... but also...'。'art'应为复数'arts'，因为后面列举了多种艺术形式。'such beautiful all arts'语序错误，应为'all these beautiful arts'。