Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强句子结构的准确性和逻辑连贯性，避免重复和模糊表达。可以多使用连接词使回答更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress and refresh my mind. For example, after a busy day, I often sing in the shower to relax and feel happier. I believe singing is not about how well you sing, but about enjoying the moment.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。注意时态和语法的准确性。

例: No, I have never formally learnt how to sing because I only sing for fun. I'm not a professional and I don't plan to join singing competitions. However, if I have the chance, I would like to take singing lessons to improve my skills.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，明确表达自己的观点，并使用恰当的连接词。

例: I usually sing for myself, especially when I am alone. Singing makes me happy and I don't have to worry about what others think. It's just a way to enjoy myself.

提案: 回答不完整且语法混乱，建议练习完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子连贯，并避免语法错误。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. It doesn't matter how well you sing; whether you are alone or singing with friends at karaoke, it can improve your mood and make you feel joyful.

× Yes, I like C umm because thing can help you relieve your stress and refresh your mind.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it can help you relieve your stress and refresh your mind.

这里缺少动名词形式'singing'，因为动词like后面需要跟动名词作宾语。原句中'like C umm because thing'不符合语法，应该用'singing'来表达喜欢唱歌。

× For example, after a busy day when you are taking a shower, you just think for happiness and you feel your stress relief.

✓ For example, after a busy day when you are taking a shower, you just think happily and you feel your stress relieved.

动词think后面不能直接跟名词'happiness'，应使用副词形式'happily'来修饰think。'stress relief'应改为形容词形式'relieved'来描述感受。

× And I think it's not about how well you think, you just sing out.

✓ And I think it's not about how well you sing, you just sing out.

这里的'think'用错了，应该是'sing'，因为句意是强调唱歌的好坏，而不是思考。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt'是英式英语，'learned'是美式英语，两者都正确，但根据语境选择统一用法。这里建议用'learned'更常见。

× No, because I just sing for fun.

✓ No, because I just sing for fun.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× I'm not professional and I don't want to take part in some singing competitions, but if there is an opportunity for me, I will try to take part in the lesson and sing better.

✓ I'm not professional and I don't want to take part in any singing competitions, but if there is an opportunity for me, I will try to take part in lessons and sing better.

'some singing competitions'改为'any singing competitions'更符合否定句习惯。'the lesson'改为'lessons'更自然，表示课程的复数。

× Uh, I dressing for myself and when you are when you are alone, you, you just sing or harm and you don't have to care about anyone else.

✓ Uh, I dress for myself and when you are alone, you just sing or hum and you don't have to care about anyone else.

'I dressing'应改为'I dress'，动词需要用一般现在时。'sing or harm'中的'harm'应为'hum'，拼写错误。重复的'when you are'应去掉一个。

× You just sing for fun and it can brings you happiness.

✓ You just sing for fun and it can bring you happiness.

情态动词can后面动词用原形，不能加s，故'brings'应改为'bring'。

× Yes, I sing. Singing can bring people happiness and it's not about how well you see you just sing no matter you are alone or you sing with friends at karaoke it can just put you in a better mood and just feel the.

✓ Yes, I sing. Singing can bring people happiness and it's not about how well you sing, you just sing no matter whether you are alone or singing with friends at karaoke. It can just put you in a better mood and make you feel better.

'how well you see'应为'how well you sing'，动词错误。'no matter you are alone or you sing with friends'应改为'no matter whether you are alone or singing with friends'，保持结构平行。句子末尾不完整，补充'make you feel better'使句子完整。