Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构不完整，表达不够连贯，且有语法错误。建议在回答时使用完整句子，避免断句，并且用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I like singing because it helps me express my emotions. For example, last week I was feeling sad about my college applications, so I sang to comfort myself and felt better afterwards.

提案: 你的回答内容较完整，但有些句子重复且语法不准确。建议避免重复表达，注意时态一致，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: No, I have never taken singing classes because I don't think I am very talented in this area. Although we had some lessons in middle school, I didn't enjoy them and never practiced outside of class, so I never seriously tried to improve my singing skills.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子不完整且缺乏连贯性。建议使用完整句子，理清表达逻辑，并用连接词连接句子。

例: I prefer to sing only for myself because singing is a private activity for me. Once, I was singing in my dormitory when one of my roommates came in, and I felt very embarrassed that they heard me.

提案: 回答中有语句不完整和表达不清晰的问题，缺少具体细节。建议用完整句子表达观点，并举具体例子说明。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people, especially when singing cheerful songs. For example, one day I sang a song about happiness, and it made me feel very joyful.

× So I'll just singing.

✓ So I'll just sing.

这里的'll是will的缩写，后面应该接动词原形，而不是动名词形式。动词不定式（动词原形）用于表示将来动作。

× And then I can.

✓ And then I can sing.

句子缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整。需要补充动词使句子完整。

× I haven't learned how to sing or taken any classes because I think I don't think I am very talented in this area.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing or taken any classes because I don't think I am very talented in this area.

句中出现了重复的“I think”，应去掉多余部分以保持句子通顺。

× Therefore, I never seriously try to improve my singing skills.

✓ Therefore, I never seriously tried to improve my singing skills.

句子描述过去的情况，谓语动词应使用过去式。

× I just want to think for myself, you know, for me, singing just a private thing.

✓ I just want to think for myself, you know, for me, singing is just a private thing.

句子缺少系动词“is”，导致结构不完整。

× And I don't want others to know that and hear that.

✓ And I don't want others to know or hear that.

使用“and”连接两个动词短语不合适，应使用“or”表示选择关系。

× And once I just sing in my dormitory and.

✓ And once I just sang in my dormitory.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词的正确形式，且“sing”应改为过去式“sang”以符合时间背景。

× My one of my roommates came in.

✓ One of my roommates came in.

“My one of my roommates”结构重复，应去掉多余的“my”。

× I was very embarrassed about, them to hearing my singing.

✓ I was very embarrassed about them hearing my singing.

“about”后面应接动名词短语，且“to”不应出现。

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people, especially when you are singing some happy song, for example, one day I was singing about the.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people, especially when you are singing some happy songs. For example, one day I was singing a song about happiness.

句子不完整且表达不清，需补充完整内容并分句使表达更清晰。

× I would sing in a song about, how to be happy and.

✓ I would sing a song about how to be happy.

句子结构混乱，需调整语序并去掉多余的介词“in”。

× At that day, I was very happy because of the song.

✓ That day, I was very happy because of the song.

“At that day”用法不正确，正确表达应为“That day”。