Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在用词错误（"seeing Russian songs"应为"singing Russian songs"），且句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词的正确使用，并尝试用更丰富的词汇描述感受。

例: Yes, I love singing because it makes me feel happy. I particularly enjoy singing Russian songs as they are very soothing and calming.

提案: 回答中语法不够准确，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally because I don't have much time. However, I usually sing songs in my spare time as a hobby.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰，语法和用词错误较多（如"sing through my family"应为"sing for my family"，"They can bear me"表达不自然）。建议使用正确的短语并简洁表达。

例: I want to sing for my family because even though I sing badly, they are very supportive. Singing with them makes me feel happy.

提案: 回答内容较好，但存在语法错误（"People usually singing"应为"People usually sing"），句子连接不够自然。建议注意时态和句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is a good way to express emotions and relieve stress. For example, people often sing in the shower or in cars to feel better, and karaoke is a fun activity that many enjoy.

× I particularly like seeing Russian songs.

✓ I particularly like singing Russian songs.

这里的动词应该是“singing”而不是“seeing”，因为表达的是喜欢唱俄罗斯歌曲，而不是看俄罗斯歌曲。动词搭配错误属于介词使用不当的范畴。

× No, I haven't learned to sing it, just one hobby.

✓ No, I haven't learned to sing; it's just a hobby.

句子中“just one hobby”表达不完整，应该用“it's just a hobby”来说明唱歌只是一个爱好。并且“learned to sing it”中的“it”多余，应去掉。

× I want to sing through my family because I sing badly.

✓ I want to sing for my family because I sing badly.

介词“through”用错了，表达“为家人唱歌”应使用“for”。

× They can bear me.

✓ They can bear me singing badly.

“bear me”表达不完整，应该说明他们能容忍我唱得不好，补充“singing badly”使句子完整。

× People usually singing in the shower or cars to feel better and the karaoke is a fun activity.

✓ People usually sing in the shower or in cars to feel better, and karaoke is a fun activity.

“singing”应改为动词原形“sing”，且“in cars”前应加介词“in”，句子中缺少连词“and”的逗号分隔。