Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了个人经历，但语言不够自然，且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的表达方式，并避免使用“interesting”来描述自己的感受。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because when I was a child, my parents often sang to me to make me happy. This early experience inspired me to develop a passion for singing.

提案: 回答中存在严重语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达自己没有正式学习过唱歌，并说明原因。

例: Honestly, I have never formally learned how to sing because I see it more as a hobby than a serious skill.

提案: 回答内容较为简单，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明为什么想为这些人唱歌。

例: I want to sing for my parents and friends because singing is a good way to express my appreciation and feelings towards them.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用更准确的句子结构，并具体说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

例: Definitely, singing is a great form of entertainment that can bring happiness to people. Moreover, singing out loud helps people stay positive and relax from daily stress.

× Yeah, I'm really interesting because when I was a child, my parents often sang a song to me to make me happy or excited.

✓ Yeah, I'm really interested because when I was a child, my parents often sang a song to me to make me happy or excited.

这里应该用形容词 'interested' 来表达“我感兴趣”，而不是 'interesting'，后者是用来形容事物或人让别人感兴趣。学生混淆了形容词的用法。

× Honestly, I have never firmly learned how to sing because I always consider seeing as a hubby other than rather than a serious skill for some academic reason.

✓ Honestly, I have never firmly learned how to sing because I always consider singing as a hobby rather than a serious skill for some academic reason.

句中 'seeing' 应为 'singing'，是拼写错误；'hubby' 应为 'hobby'，也是拼写错误；'other than rather than' 结构重复，应改为 'rather than'。这些错误影响了句子的表达和语法正确性。

× My parents, my friends, I guess because I think singing is a good way to express your appreciation or attitude or something.

✓ My parents, my friends, I guess, because I think singing is a good way to express your appreciation or attitude or something.

句中缺少逗号，导致句子结构不清晰。加上逗号后，句子更符合英语表达习惯。

× Definitely thing is a great way of entertainment which can bring happiness to people.

✓ Definitely, singing is a great way of entertainment which can bring happiness to people.

句中缺少主语，'thing' 用法不当，应明确主语为 'singing'。此外，缺少逗号使句子不通顺。

× Additionally, I think singing out aloud it helps people stay positive and it's a good way to disconnect from the others.

✓ Additionally, I think singing out loud helps people stay positive and it's a good way to disconnect from others.

'singing out aloud' 应为 'singing out loud'，这是固定搭配；'disconnect from the others' 中 'the' 不必要，应去掉。