Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并且注意时态和词汇的准确使用。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体原因支持观点。

例: No, I don't like singing because I am tone deaf and often sing out of tune. This makes me feel less confident, so I prefer not to sing in public.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误（saying应为singing），句子结构不够流畅。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并且注意时态一致。

例: I haven't taken any formal singing courses, but a friend who is good at singing once taught me some useful techniques. They helped me improve and boosted my confidence.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，句子冗长且重复。建议简化表达，分成两句，明确说明对象和原因。

例: I usually sing to myself in the shower because it helps me relax. Sometimes, after finishing a stressful project, I sing for close friends, but I avoid singing in front of others because I feel embarrassed.

提案: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误和用词不当（a positive and catchy songs应为 positive and catchy songs）。建议注意单复数一致，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I think it depends on the type of song. Singing positive and catchy songs can definitely convey happiness to others, but sad love songs might make people feel worse.

× Definitely not when saying I always tone deaf and I always think I sing out of tune so I think doing it will make me feel less confident so I choose not to sing in the public.

✓ Definitely not. When I say I am always tone deaf and I always think I sing out of tune, so I think doing it will make me feel less confident, so I choose not to sing in public.

句中缺少冠词“am”导致主语和谓语不匹配，且“in the public”应为“in public”，因为“public”作为副词使用时不需要冠词。

× Actually I didn't have the formal courses or tutorials online, but my friend who was really good at it once told me some techniques about saying.

✓ Actually, I didn't have formal courses or tutorials online, but my friend who was really good at it once told me some techniques about singing.

“saying”应为“singing”，这是词汇错误，不属于语法错误，但需纠正。句中“the formal courses”应为“formal courses”，因为这里泛指课程。

× Also give me some confidence.

✓ It also gave me some confidence.

原句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不完整。应补充主语“it”和谓语“gave”，并使用过去时态与上下文一致。

× Actually I only sing to myself in shower because it made me feel relaxing or sometimes I may sing after I finish a very stressful project to close friends because I think I think out of tune.

✓ Actually, I only sing to myself in the shower because it makes me feel relaxed, or sometimes I may sing to close friends after I finish a very stressful project because I think I sing out of tune.

“in shower”应为“in the shower”，需要冠词。形容词“relaxing”应为过去分词“relaxed”来描述感受。句中“sing after I finish a very stressful project to close friends”结构混乱，应调整为“sing to close friends after I finish a very stressful project”。

× I will feel embarrassed seeing to some.

✓ I will feel embarrassed singing to some.

“seeing to some”不符合语法，应为“singing to some”，动词形式错误导致句子不通顺。

× If you sing a positive and catchy songs you would definitely pass emotion to others.

✓ If you sing positive and catchy songs, you would definitely pass emotions to others.

“a positive and catchy songs”中“a”与复数名词“songs”不匹配，应去掉“a”。“emotion”应为复数“emotions”，因为情感通常是复数形式。

× But if it's like a sad love song I think it just makes the situation worse.

✓ But if it's like a sad love song, I think it just makes the situation worse.

此句无明显语法错误，仅缺少逗号，建议加上以改善句子结构。