Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中多次将'singing'误说成'seeing'，影响了表达的准确性。建议注意发音和拼写，避免此类错误。同时，回答中句子结构较简单，缺少连接词，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Definitely, I really enjoy singing and often go to karaoke with my friends on weekends. Singing is a great way to express emotions, and it helps me release stress after a long day. Moreover, singing with friends creates a fun and relaxing atmosphere.

提案: 回答较为完整且逻辑清晰，但可以增加一些连接词使句子更流畅。此外，词汇可以更丰富一些，避免重复使用简单词汇。

例: Not really. I have never learned to sing professionally because I prefer to sing naturally. Since I don't plan to perform publicly or pursue singing as a career, I believe formal training is unnecessary for my own enjoyment.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，如'crash'应为'crush'，'seeing'应为'singing'。句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议加强语法和词汇的准确性，并使用完整句子表达观点。

例: No one comes to my mind immediately, but if I have to choose, I would sing for a special person like a crush. Although we are not officially in a relationship, we like each other, and I think singing can express my feelings.

提案: 回答中多次将'singing'误说成'seeing'，影响理解。句子结构有些混乱，如'group or choice'不明确。建议注意词汇准确性，使用清晰的句子结构，并适当使用连接词。

例: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. It allows individuals to express their emotions and can be very uplifting, especially when done with others in a group or choir. For example, many people feel joyful and relaxed when they sing their favorite songs.

× Definitely, I really enjoy seeing and I often go to karaoke with my friends at the weekend.

✓ Definitely, I really enjoy singing and I often go to karaoke with my friends at the weekend.

动词enjoy后面应接动名词形式，seeing是动词see的现在分词，表示“看”，应改为singing表示“唱歌”。

× I think seeing is a great way to express the emotions and this can help release stress after a long day.

✓ I think singing is a great way to express emotions and this can help release stress after a long day.

此处应使用动名词singing表示“唱歌”，seeing表示“看”，不符合语境；另外，express emotions中emotion前不需要加定冠词the。

× Also when you're singing with your friends it creates a fun and relaxing.

✓ Also, when you're singing with your friends, it creates a fun and relaxing atmosphere.

句子缺少宾语，fun和relaxing是形容词，需加名词如atmosphere来完成表达。

× Not really. I have never learned how to sing professionally because I prefer to sing naturally.

✓ Not really. I have never learned how to sing professionally because I prefer singing naturally.

prefer后面接动名词singing更自然，表示“更喜欢唱歌的自然方式”。

× There isn't a person immediately jump my mind but if I have to say I will sing for a special person like a crash or someone.

✓ There isn't a person immediately jumping to my mind but if I have to say I will sing for a special person like a crush or someone.

短语是jump to one's mind，动词jump应改为现在分词jumping作定语；crash应为crush，意为暗恋对象。

× We are not officially in a relationship but we like each other and I think seeing can.

✓ We are not officially in a relationship but we like each other and I think singing can.

seeing应改为singing，表示“唱歌”，符合语境。

× Yes, I believe seeing can definitely bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people.

seeing应改为singing，表示“唱歌”，符合语境。

× Seeing allows individuals to express their emotions and can be very uplifting, especially when done with others in a group or choice.

✓ Singing allows individuals to express their emotions and can be very uplifting, especially when done with others in a group or choir.

seeing应改为singing；choice应为choir，意为合唱团，符合语境。

× For example, many people feel joyful and relax when they sing their favorite song.

✓ For example, many people feel joyful and relaxed when they sing their favorite songs.

relax应为形容词relaxed，表示“感到放松”；favorite song应为复数songs，因为many people对应多首歌曲。