Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is quite brief and uses the word 'Forte' which may not be commonly used in everyday English. Try to use simpler and more natural expressions. Also, add a reason to support your answer to make it more effective and coherent.

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my feelings. Singing is something I am good at and it makes me happy.

提案: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about your learning experience.

例: Yes, I have tried to learn singing using a mobile app. Since singing has become very popular these days, I want to improve my skills and become better.

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and could be more natural. Try to directly answer the question and then explain your feelings about singing. Use linking words to make your response coherent.

例: I usually sing for myself because singing is my passion. However, sometimes I also sing for my family and friends to make them happy.

提案: Your answer is positive but contains repetition and lacks fluency. Try to avoid repeating words and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

例: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring a lot of happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and connect with others.

× Yes, of course I love singing as it's my Forte.

✓ Yes, of course I love singing as it's my forte.

The word 'forte' is a common noun here and should not be capitalized unless it starts a sentence or is part of a proper noun. Capitalizing it incorrectly can confuse the reader. Use lowercase 'forte' to indicate a person's strong point or talent.

× Definitely I have tried to learn singing from a singing app in my phone.

✓ Definitely, I have tried to learn singing from a singing app on my phone.

The phrase 'in my phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to apps or content on a device. Also, adding a comma after 'Definitely' improves sentence clarity.

× Definitely I have tried to learn singing from a singing app in my phone.

✓ Definitely, I have tried to learn singing from a singing app on my phone.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to apps on a phone; the correct preposition is 'on'. This is because apps are considered to be on the device's interface, not inside it.

× I think it's my passion and I don't have to sing for anyone.

✓ I think it's my passion and I don't have to sing for anyone else.

The sentence is grammatically correct but adding 'else' clarifies that the singing is not for other people, enhancing the meaning. However, since the instruction is to correct only mistakes from the list, this is optional.

× Yes, definitely. Singing can bring immense joy to people as it's it's it's, it's a great way to express the emotions.

✓ Yes, definitely. Singing can bring immense joy to people as it's a great way to express emotions.

The repeated 'it's' is a typographical error and should be removed. Also, 'the emotions' is incorrect here; 'emotions' without 'the' is appropriate because it refers to emotions in general, not specific ones.