Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误和冗余。可以简洁表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because music helps me relax after work. Whenever I have free time, I like to sing my favorite songs to unwind.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达有误。应直接回答是否学过唱歌，并说明原因，使用连贯的句子。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I don't feel confident about my voice. I prefer to sing just for fun rather than professionally.

提案: 回答应更明确，避免语法错误。可以说明想为谁唱歌以及原因，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I would like to sing for my girlfriend because she enjoys my singing. She always encourages me and gives me helpful feedback.

提案: 回答应更自然且具体，避免重复。可以说明唱歌如何带来快乐，并用连接词连接观点。

例: Definitely, singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and express their emotions. When we sing, it can improve our mood and make us feel more comfortable.

× I will listen to music and singing on some moments.

✓ I will listen to music and sing at some moments.

动词并列时，两个动词应保持一致形式。这里 should 用动词原形 sing 而不是动名词 singing。

× Actually I haven't learned how to sing because I went that time and I think I'm not a prefer in the scene because I my voice is ugly for me.

✓ Actually I haven't learned how to sing because I went at that time and I think I'm not a performer on the scene because my voice is ugly to me.

过去时态使用不当，went 后应加介词 at 表示时间点；prefer 是动词，需改为名词 performer；my voice is ugly for me 应改为 ugly to me 表示对某人的感受。

× I think I'm not a prefer in the scene because I my voice is ugly for me.

✓ I think I'm not a performer on the scene because my voice is ugly to me.

代词使用错误，I my voice 是重复，应去掉 I；prefer 应为 performer。

× Uh for me I want thing for my girlfriend because I love singing with her.

✓ Uh for me I want to sing for my girlfriend because I love singing with her.

want 后应接动词不定式 to sing，而不是名词 thing。

× She will since she will give me a good response about my singing and she will tell how to sing.

✓ She will since she will give me a good response about my singing and she will tell me how to sing.

tell 后应接宾语 me，缺少宾语导致句子不完整。

× She will since she will give me a good response about my singing and she will tell how to sing.

✓ She will, since she will give me a good response about my singing and she will tell me how to sing.

句子缺少逗号，导致句意不清。

× That thing will bring happiness to people.

✓ That will bring happiness to people.

此处不需要使用 thing，直接用 that 指代前文内容更自然。

× We all feel our own from the singing.

✓ We all feel our own feelings from the singing.

own 后应有名词 feelings，单独使用 own 不完整。