Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时句子较长且有重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I love singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. When I sing, I feel truly joyful.

提案: 回答结构基本正确，但语法有误，且表达不够自然。建议注意时态和主谓一致，使用更地道的表达。

例: Yes, I learned to sing when I was a child because my parents wanted me to develop an extra skill.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，且表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，注意主谓一致，并避免重复。

例: I want to sing for my mother because she always enjoys listening to my songs and supports me in learning to sing.

提案: 回答中有发音或拼写错误（seeing应为 singing），句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议注意发音和拼写，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

例: I think singing can bring happiness because when people sing and dance together, it helps them bond and feel closer to each other.

× Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child because my parents want me to have an extra skill to improve myself.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child because my parents wanted me to have an extra skill to improve myself.

这里的主语是复数的“parents”，谓语动词应与过去时态保持一致，使用“wanted”而不是“want”。动词时态不一致导致主谓不一致。

× I want to sing for my mother because my mother always want to listen my songs, listen to my songs and they always support me to sing, learn singing.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because my mother always wants to listen to my songs, and they always support me to sing and learn singing.

“my mother”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“wants”。另外，“listen”后面应加介词“to”，构成固定搭配“listen to”。

× I want to sing for my mother because my mother always want to listen my songs, listen to my songs and they always support me to sing, learn singing.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because my mother always wants to listen to my songs, and they always support me to sing and learn singing.

动词“listen”后面必须加介词“to”，表示“听某物”，缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× I think seeing can bring happiness to people because when people sing and dance, they will be they will work together and their heart will be close to each other.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people because when people sing and dance, they will work together and their hearts will be close to each other.

“seeing”应为“singing”，符合语境。主语“they”对应复数，谓语“will be they will work”重复且错误，应删去多余部分。名词“heart”应为复数“hearts”，与复数主语一致。