Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达需更自然流畅，避免语法错误，如“helped me relaxed”应为“helps me relax”。内容上可以更具体说明喜欢唱歌的原因。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, when I am doing homework or housework, I like to listen to music and sometimes sing along to feel more cheerful.

提案: 回答应避免断句不连贯，如“when I was a kid.”后面应接完整句子。时态使用需准确，且内容可更丰富具体。

例: No, I have never learned to sing professionally. However, when I was a child, I learned to play some musical instruments, which helped me develop a good sense of rhythm.

提案: 回答中断句不完整，表达不流畅。应避免口语填充词“Uh”，并且句子应完整连贯。内容上可以更具体说明想为谁唱歌及原因。

例: I would like to sing for myself because singing makes me happy and relaxed. Actually, I dream of becoming a professional singer one day, although I think my singing skills need improvement.

提案: 回答中句子断裂，表达不连贯。应使用连接词使句子流畅。内容上可以更具体说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

例: Yes, definitely. Singing and listening to different types of music, such as pop and R&B, can help people relax and feel happier because music often uplifts our mood.

× Music helped me relaxed.

✓ Music helped me relax.

这里的动词help后面应该接动词原形relax，而不是过去分词relaxed。因为help后面通常跟动词原形，表示帮助做某事。

× No, I had never learned how to sing professionally.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing professionally.

此处描述过去到现在的经历，应该用现在完成时have learned，而不是过去完成时had learned。

× When I was a kid.

✓ When I was a kid,

这是一个时间状语从句，不能单独成句，应该和后面的主句连起来，形成完整句子。

× I learned some music instruments, but I haven't learned how to sing.

✓ I learned some musical instruments, but I haven't learned how to sing.

这里的music instruments应改为musical instruments，musical是形容词，修饰instruments。

× Uh, actually, I have a dream of being a singer, but my.

✓ Uh, actually, I have a dream of being a singer, but my singing skill is not good in my opinion.

原句不完整，断句错误，应将后半句接上，形成完整句子。

× Singing skill is not good in my opinion.

✓ My singing skill is not good in my opinion.

缺少所有格my，表示“我的唱歌技巧”，需要加上my。

× There are a variety of music types like pop music.

✓ There are a variety of music types, like pop music.

like前应加逗号，表示举例。

× R&B is a good way to help people relaxed.

✓ R&B is a good way to help people relax.

help后面应接动词原形relax，而不是过去分词relaxed。