Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误和重复用词，影响了表达的流畅性。建议注意动词时态和单复数的一致性，避免重复词汇，并尝试使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing very much because it helps me relax and improves my mood, especially after a long day of work and study. Singing relieves my stress and makes me feel happier.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和句子不完整，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免句子残缺，并补充具体细节使回答更完整。

例: Yes, I have been taking singing lessons since last year because I want to participate in a singing competition this year. I practice regularly to improve my skills.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和句子未完成，表达不够清晰。建议避免口头语，使用完整句子，并具体说明想为谁唱歌及原因。

例: I want to sing for everyone who enjoys my singing, especially for myself. I find my voice relaxing, and listening to my own songs helps me feel calm and happy.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语言不够流畅且有重复和语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免口头语，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I believe singing can bring happiness depending on the type of song. For example, upbeat rock or happy songs can make people feel joyful, while sad songs with melancholy melodies might evoke different emotions.

× UMM singing is relaxing and make me makes me feel happy especially after a day of working and studying.

✓ UMM singing is relaxing and makes me feel happy especially after a day of working and studying.

主语是单数'singing'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'makes'，而不是'make'或'makes me'重复。

× Singing help helps me to relieve my pressure and UMM have a better mood.

✓ Singing helps me to relieve my pressure and UMM have a better mood.

主语'singing'是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'helps'，而不是'help'。

× I'm currently taking singing lessons which I started to learn it last year as I want to join a singing competition this year.

✓ I'm currently taking singing lessons which I started last year as I want to join a singing competition this year.

'learn it'中的'it'多余，'started to learn it'结构不正确，应去掉'it'，改为'started last year'。

× I practice singing very much in order to get.

✓ I practice singing very much in order to improve.

句子不完整，缺少宾语或目的，需补充完整表达目的，如'improve'。

× I want to sing for everyone who liked my singing, uh, especially myself.

✓ I want to sing for everyone who likes my singing, uh, especially myself.

时态不一致，'liked'应改为现在时'likes'，因为指的是一般情况。

× I like my sound very much since I think it is very relaxing and whenever I listen to the song I sang, I would feel relaxed and.

✓ I like my sound very much since I think it is very relaxing, and whenever I listen to the song I sang, I feel relaxed.

句子结尾不完整，'and'后缺少内容，且时态应统一，'would feel'改为一般现在时'feel'。

× It's umm the singer sings.

✓ It depends on the singer's singing.

原句结构不完整且表达不清，需改为完整表达，使用所有格'singer's singing'。

× For some rock and happy song it might bring people happiness, but for some sad song with umm some sad melody.

✓ For some rock and happy songs, it might bring people happiness, but for some sad songs with sad melodies.

'song'应为复数'songs'，'melody'应为复数'melodies'，以匹配上下文。