Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，且有重复和多余的词汇。建议简化句子结构，注意时态一致性，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I really love singing because my parents enjoy it too. When I was young, they used to teach me and sing with me. Even now, they like listening to songs and singing along.

提案: 表达不够流畅，语法错误较多，词汇使用不准确。建议使用更自然的表达，注意冠词和名词单复数形式，避免重复。

例: No, I haven't taken any professional singing or vocal classes because singing is just a daily activity and a way to relax for me. It's a personal hobby, not a professional skill.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，避免犹豫和重复，使用正确的时态和单复数形式。

例: That's an interesting question. I haven't thought about it before, but if I had to choose, I would sing for my parents.

提案: 表达不够连贯，语法错误较多，词汇使用不准确。建议使用更清晰的句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，使用恰当的词汇表达情感。

例: Yes, I think singing is a way to express emotions. When people sing relaxing songs, they can share happiness with those who listen.

× when I was small they will teach me or sing with me.

✓ when I was small they would teach me or sing with me.

这里描述过去的习惯动作，应该用情态动词would表示过去经常发生的事情，而不是将来时的will。

× now they also like to listen songs and follow to sing the music.

✓ now they also like to listen to songs and sing along with the music.

动词listen后面应接介词to，表示“听”；follow to sing不符合英语习惯，正确表达是sing along with，表示“跟着唱”。

× No I haven't joined any professionals singing and vocal class because sing for me sing just daily activity or relaxing way.

✓ No, I haven't joined any professional singing or vocal classes because singing for me is just a daily activity or a way to relax.

professional是形容词，修饰singing和vocal class时应为professional singing和vocal classes；any后面名词应为复数classes；动词sing应改为动名词singing；句子缺少is连接主语和表语。

× It's my personal hobbies not a professional knowledge.

✓ It's my personal hobby, not professional knowledge.

hobbies是复数，前面用的是单数it's，需改为hobby；knowledge是不可数名词，前面不加a。

× I haven't think about it before.

✓ I haven't thought about it before.

现在完成时中，think应使用过去分词thought。

× I didn't have a single or specific uh people that I want to sing for.

✓ I didn't have a single or specific person that I want to sing for.

people是复数，前面用单数single或specific时应使用单数person。

× if I want to choose a pers, a person or some people, I think maybe my parents.

✓ if I want to choose a person or some people, I think maybe my parents.

pers是拼写错误，应为person。

× I think singing can, is a way to express the motion.

✓ I think singing can be a way to express emotion.

句子中缺少动词be；motion应为emotion，表示“情感”。

× if people sing some relaxing songs so that the, uh, the motion of happiness can share to people who listen.

✓ if people sing some relaxing songs so that the feeling of happiness can be shared with people who listen.

share是及物动词，后面应有宾语；应使用被动语态be shared；share后面接介词with表示“与……分享”；motion用词不当，应为feeling或emotion。