Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且表达了个人感受，但句子结构稍显简单，且有语法错误（makes应为make）。建议使用更丰富的词汇和更准确的语法，同时避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it allows me to relax and relieve stress. When I'm alone, singing helps me feel more at ease and lifts my mood.

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不完整，且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地描述学习经历，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I learned to sing when I was in 11th grade, but only for a few months. This experience made me appreciate how wonderful music is, although I stopped after enrolling in university.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误（relax oneself应为relaxing for myself），句子结构不完整。建议用更准确的表达说明自己唱歌的目的。

例: I usually sing for myself because it helps me relax. Singing for others might make me feel pressured to perform well.

提案: 回答较好，表达了观点并提供了理由，但有小的语法错误（an universal应为 a universal），且句子可以更简洁。建议注意冠词使用并简化表达。

例: Yes, definitely. Music is a universal language that everyone understands, and it can express emotions that touch people deeply.

× Yes, I do like singing because I love music and I think singing can sometimes release my stress and makes me feel more comfortable when I'm alone.

✓ Yes, I do like singing because I love music and I think singing can sometimes release my stress and make me feel more comfortable when I'm alone.

这里的主语是singing，后面有两个并列谓语动词，should保持一致，第二个动词makes应改为make，保持与主语一致。

× Yes I did when I was in 11th grade I learned to sing but just for few months and I think this experience umm made me realize that music is so wonderful and beautiful but I quit it that after I enrolled into.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was in 11th grade, I learned to sing but just for a few months, and I think this experience made me realize that music is so wonderful and beautiful, but I quit it after I enrolled.

句子中缺少标点符号，导致句子结构混乱。'for few months'应为'for a few months'，表示一段时间。'quit it that after I enrolled into'表达不完整，去掉that和into使句子通顺。

× Well, I would say myself because I think singing is a thing that I'm really relax oneself, not others.

✓ Well, I would say myself because I think singing is a thing that really relaxes me, not others.

'I'm really relax oneself'中，'oneself'用法错误，且主语和谓语不匹配，应改为'really relaxes me'，使主语和宾语一致。

× I would consider too much if I sing for others appreciation.

✓ I would consider too much if I sing for others' appreciation.

'others appreciation'缺少所有格，应为'others' appreciation'，表示“别人的欣赏”。

× Yes, of course. I believe that music is an universal language that everybody can understand, and music can express emotions that can be felt by anyone else.

✓ Yes, of course. I believe that music is a universal language that everybody can understand, and music can express emotions that can be felt by anyone else.

'an universal'中，universal发音以辅音音素开头，故应使用不定冠词'a'而非'an'。