Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and lacks fluency. Try to use correct verb forms and make your sentences more natural and connected. For example, use 'I often sing' instead of 'I often singing' and explain why you like singing to enrich your answer.

例: Yes, I like singing, especially when I am home alone. I often sing to relax and enjoy myself, even though I am not very good at it.

提案: Your answer is too short and unclear. Try to give a direct response and add some details about your experience with learning singing. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and make your answer more complete.

例: Yes, I have taken some singing lessons before to improve my voice and learn proper techniques.

提案: Your answer is brief and informal. Try to respond more naturally and provide reasons for your preference. Avoid laughter or informal expressions in your answer.

例: I usually sing just for myself because it helps me relax and express my feelings.

提案: Your answer has some unclear parts and grammatical mistakes. Make sure your sentences are complete and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why singing brings happiness.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because fun and cheerful songs can lift our mood and reduce stress.

× When I am home alone I often singing.

✓ When I am home alone I often sing.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used here after the adverb 'often'. After modal verbs or auxiliary verbs like 'am', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. The correct form is 'I often sing'. To improve, use the base verb form after auxiliary verbs and adverbs of frequency.

× Maybe silly but it's OK.

✓ Maybe it's silly, but it's OK.

The original sentence lacks a subject in the first clause, making it incomplete. Adding 'it's' clarifies the subject and verb, forming a complete sentence. To improve, ensure each clause has a subject and verb for clarity.

× Thinking can bring happiness to people, especially the funny, fun songs because it's really fun and.

✓ Singing can bring happiness to people, especially the funny, fun songs because it's really fun.

The word 'Thinking' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning relates to 'singing'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly. To improve, use the correct verb form that matches the context and ensure sentences are complete.