Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I very like'. Bạn nên nói 'I really like singing' hoặc 'I enjoy singing'. Ngoài ra, hãy mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích thêm lý do tại sao bạn thích hát để câu trả lời tự nhiên và đầy đủ hơn.

例: I really like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Whenever I sing, I feel happy and less stressed.

提案: Bạn cần sử dụng thì đúng và cấu trúc câu phù hợp. Câu trả lời nên là 'No, I haven't learned how to sing' hoặc 'No, I have never taken singing lessons'. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể giải thích thêm lý do để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally, but I enjoy singing for fun at home.

提案: Câu trả lời cần có động từ đúng và cấu trúc hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ 'I want to sing for myself'. Bạn cũng nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích lý do hoặc hoàn cảnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I want to sing for myself because it makes me feel joyful and confident.

提案: Bạn cần tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng. Ví dụ, 'Yes, I think singing can make people feel happy because it helps them relax and enjoy themselves.' Hãy cố gắng nói rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their feelings and have fun.

× I very like singing because singing make me feel happy.

✓ I like singing very much because singing makes me feel happy.

The adverb 'very' is incorrectly placed before the verb 'like'. In English, 'very' is used to modify adjectives or other adverbs, not verbs. The correct phrase is 'like very much'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'singing' (third person singular).

× I very like singing because singing make me feel happy.

✓ I like singing very much because singing makes me feel happy.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'.

× No, I don't like learned singing.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing.

The phrase 'don't like learned' is incorrect. The correct form is 'haven't learned' to indicate past experience. Also, 'learned singing' is awkward; 'learned how to sing' is more natural.

× I want sing for me.

✓ I want to sing for myself.

After 'want', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to sing'. Also, 'for me' is better expressed as 'for myself' to indicate the beneficiary of the action.

× Yes, I think because if if people singing is will feel happy.

✓ Yes, I think if people sing, they will feel happy.

The sentence has redundant 'if' and incorrect verb forms. 'People singing is will feel' is ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'if people sing, they will feel happy' using the present simple in the if-clause and future simple in the main clause.