Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is good but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I love singing and music', you can say 'I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and recharge.'

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and recharge my mind. Although I don't have a very good voice, I still like to sing with my friends and family during gatherings.

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve grammar. Use clear and concise sentences with proper verb forms. For example, say 'I have never learned how to sing, although I am interested in singing and music.'

例: No, I have never learned how to sing, although I am interested in singing and music. I have not taken any singing classes yet.

提案: Your answer is understandable but incomplete and has grammar mistakes. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words. For example, 'I want to sing for my family and friends during gatherings because it helps me relax, even though I don't have a nice voice.'

例: I want to sing for my family and friends during gatherings because it helps me relax. Although I don't have a nice voice, I always try my best to sing well.

提案: Avoid mistakes like 'nice boys' instead of 'nice voices'. Use precise vocabulary and clear sentence structure. For example, 'Even if people don't have nice voices, they can still enjoy singing with family and friends, which brings happiness and relaxation.'

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Even if someone doesn't have a nice voice, they can still enjoy singing with their family and friends, which helps them relax and feel happy during social events.

× I'm interested to singing and the music

✓ I'm interested in singing and music

The verb 'interested' is followed by the preposition 'in' and then a gerund (-ing form). The phrase 'interested to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'interested in singing'. Also, 'the music' is better as 'music' here because it refers to music in general.

× I did not take any, uh, singing class

✓ I did not take any singing classes

The phrase 'singing class' should be plural 'singing classes' to indicate any classes in general. Also, 'did not take' is correct past tense, but the noun should be plural to match the context.

× I don't have nice voice

✓ I don't have a nice voice

The noun 'voice' is singular and countable, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. The phrase 'nice voice' without an article is incorrect.

× I always try to sing better not to impress but to relax my

✓ I always try to sing better, not to impress but to relax myself

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the reflexive pronoun 'myself' after 'relax'. Also, a comma is needed before 'not to impress' to separate the clauses clearly.

× Although we people don't have nice boys, they can sing and enjoy singing

✓ Although we people don't have nice voices, they can sing and enjoy singing

The word 'boys' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'voices' to refer to singing ability. Also, 'voices' is plural to match 'we people'.