Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami. Misalnya, gunakan 'I enjoy music' bukan 'I am enjoy with music'. Jawaban juga bisa diperluas dengan alasan yang lebih spesifik.

例: Yes, I like singing because I enjoy music and it helps me relax after a long day.

提案: Gunakan bentuk waktu yang tepat dan kalimat yang lebih lengkap. Misalnya, gunakan 'I have never learned' bukan 'I never learn'. Tambahkan sedikit penjelasan untuk memperkaya jawaban.

例: No, I have never learned how to sing formally, but I enjoy singing casually at home.

提案: Gabungkan kalimat agar lebih alami dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk kelancaran. Misalnya, gunakan 'I want to sing for my parents, teacher, friends, and boyfriend because I love them.'

例: I want to sing for my parents, my teacher, my friends, and my boyfriend because I love them and want to make them happy.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa, gunakan bentuk kata kerja yang benar, dan jelaskan lebih spesifik. Misalnya, gunakan 'music can bring' bukan 'music can brings'. Tambahkan alasan atau contoh.

例: In my opinion, singing can bring happiness and calmness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and relax.

× Yes, I like singing because I am enjoy with music.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I enjoy music.

The verb 'enjoy' should not be used with 'am' and 'with' in this context. The correct form is 'I enjoy music.' The original sentence incorrectly uses the present continuous form 'am enjoy' and the preposition 'with' which is unnecessary here.

× Never. I never learn about singing and music.

✓ Never. I have never learned about singing and music.

The sentence requires the present perfect tense 'have never learned' to indicate an experience up to now. 'Learn' in simple present is incorrect here because the action refers to past experience.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing to?

The correct preposition to use with 'sing' when indicating the audience is 'to' not 'for'. 'Sing to someone' means performing for them.

× In my opinion, music can brings happiness and calmness.

✓ In my opinion, music can bring happiness and calmness.

After modal verbs like 'can', the base form of the verb should be used. 'Brings' is incorrect; it should be 'bring'.