Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了不喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够流畅且有语法错误。建议练习使用正确的时态和表达方式，避免重复和语法错误，使回答更自然。

例: No, I don't like singing because I lack confidence. I feel nervous singing in front of strangers or even my relatives because I think my singing is poor.

提案: 回答中有很多犹豫和重复，句子结构不完整。建议练习组织完整句子，使用连词连接信息，使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, when I was a child, my parents sent me to a club to learn singing. I appreciated that experience because I was interested in singing.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达有误，且未直接回答问题。建议明确回答问题，使用完整句子，并解释原因。

例: I prefer not to sing for strangers who are in a bad mood because I believe singing should bring joy and comfort to people.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构混乱，重复使用词汇。建议使用更准确的词汇和连词，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people and help them make friends. Happiness from singing is contagious and can improve people's mood.

× No, I don't like singing because I'm lack of confidence.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I lack confidence.

这里的错误是介词使用错误，'I'm lack of confidence'中'I'm'是不正确的，应该直接用'I lack confidence'，因为'lack'是动词，不需要'be'动词。

× I I, I lock the courage to sing in a stranger's or my relatives because I think I my singing is poor.

✓ I lack the courage to sing in front of strangers or my relatives because I think my singing is poor.

这里的错误是代词使用错误，'lock'应为'lack'，'in a stranger's or my relatives'应改为'in front of strangers or my relatives'，'I my singing'应为'my singing'。需要正确使用代词和介词。

× Yes, because when I was a child, my parents will, uh, my parents will uh oh, send me to uh, club to learn how to sing and I appreciate that experiences because I, umm, interested in singing and uh.

✓ Yes, because when I was a child, my parents would send me to a club to learn how to sing and I appreciate that experience because I was interested in singing.

这里的错误是情态动词使用错误，过去时态中应使用'would'表示过去习惯动作，而不是'will'。另外，'a club'需要冠词，'experiences'应为单数'experience'，'interested'前缺少动词'was'。

× I don't want to sing for strangers who have in bad mood because I I I think singing is a way to to make make one stay.

✓ I don't want to sing for strangers who are in a bad mood because I think singing is a way to make one stay.

这里的错误是介词使用错误，'have in bad mood'应改为'are in a bad mood'，因为表达情绪状态时用动词'be'加介词'in'。

× Yes, singing can bring happiness to people and it can be a way to make friends so seeing him bring people happy and happy is contagious so.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to people and it can be a way to make friends. So singing brings people happiness and happiness is contagious.

这里的错误是形容词和副词使用错误，'seeing him bring people happy'应为'singing brings people happiness'，'happy'应为名词'happiness'，句子结构不完整，需要分句表达。