Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。例如，“prefer to singing”应为“prefer singing”或“prefer to sing”。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and relieve stress. I usually prefer singing with friends at parties, as it is a fun way to connect with people who share similar interests.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，明确表达自己的经历和感受。

例: Yes, of course. During my student life, schools always offered singing lessons. However, I often lost confidence, so I prefer not to sing in front of others.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，如“has been”应为“have been”，“when I singing”应为“when I sing”。建议完整表达观点，注意语法和句子完整性。

例: Actually, I prefer to sing for my family because they have always been my biggest supporters. When I sing for them, I feel relaxed and comfortable.

提案: 回答中存在词汇使用错误，如“relieve their suggest”应为“relieve their stress”，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议使用准确词汇，表达完整的观点。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and relieve their stress. Singing can help people feel happier and more relaxed.

× I usually prefer to singing with friends during parties.

✓ I usually prefer singing with friends during parties.

动词prefer后面应直接接动名词形式，不能用不定式to + 动词原形。这里应使用动名词singing。

× Yes of course during my students life the schools always taking lessons for how to sing, but I always lose some confidence so I don't prefer to sing in front of others I always feel.

✓ Yes, of course, during my student life, the schools always took lessons on how to sing, but I always lost some confidence so I don't prefer to sing in front of others; I always feel nervous.

描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去时态。这里的taking应改为took，lose应改为lost。

× Actually I prefer to sing for my family because they always has been my biggest supporters and when I singing for my family I have to be relaxed but if I.

✓ Actually, I prefer to sing for my family because they have always been my biggest supporters, and when I sing for my family, I have to be relaxed.

主语they是复数，谓语动词应使用have而非has。动词sing前应使用原形，不能用现在分词singing。

× Actually I prefer to sing for my family because they always has been my biggest supporters and when I singing for my family I have to be relaxed but if I.

✓ Actually, I prefer to sing for my family because they have always been my biggest supporters, and when I sing for my family, I have to be relaxed.

动词prefer后面接不定式to sing是正确的，但后面when引导的从句中，动词应用原形sing而非现在分词singing。

× Yes, in my opinion, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is a good way to express emotions and relieve their suggest and the singing camp express their unhappy.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is a good way to express emotions and relieve their stress, and the singing camp expresses their unhappiness.

单词suggest用错，应为stress（压力）。camp后面缺少动词表达，且unhappy应改为名词形式unhappiness。

× Yes, in my opinion, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is a good way to express emotions and relieve their suggest and the singing camp express their unhappy.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is a good way to express emotions and relieve their stress, and the singing camp expresses their unhappiness.

主语the singing camp是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式expresses。