Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和用词不准确，句子结构不完整，影响了表达的清晰度。建议练习使用正确的句子结构和词汇，如用"Singing makes me happy and helps me make many friends."来表达。

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and helps me make many friends.

提案: 你的回答几乎无法理解，缺乏连贯性和相关内容。建议直接回答问题，并用完整句子说明，如"No, I have never taken singing lessons."

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons before.

提案: 回答中表达了想为朋友唱歌的意愿，但语法错误较多，且句子不连贯。建议使用正确的句子结构和连接词，如"I want to sing for my friends because they are very kind and make me happy."

例: I want to sing for my friends because they are very kind and make me happy.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但有拼写错误和语法问题。建议注意单词拼写和句子结构，如"Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps me relax and feel happier."

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps me relax and feel happier.

× I like singing because I think sing song can make me more happy and make me make many friends.

✓ I like singing because I think singing songs can make me happier and help me make many friends.

这里'sing song'应为复数形式'singing songs'，因为指的是多首歌曲。'more happy'应改为'happier'，因为比较级形容词需要用-er形式。

× No, I usually nursing is very. Convenient. Whatever, wherever, more. Ever.

✓ No, I have never learnt how to sing.

原句结构混乱，无法表达清楚意思。应使用完整句子表达否定经历。

× I want to sing for my friends because I think my friends very, very great.

✓ I want to sing for my friends because I think my friends are very, very great.

原句缺少动词'are'，导致句子不完整。

× They make me more happier and I want to make things with her.

✓ They make me happier and I want to do things with them.

'more happier'是错误的比较级用法，'happier'本身已是比较级。'make things with her'表达不清，应改为'do things with them'，且代词应与复数friends一致。

× Yes, I think seeing can bring happiness to people because singing can make me relax and happier.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing can make me relaxed and happier.

'seeing'应为'singing'，且'relax'应改为形容词'relaxed'以修饰主语。