Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达方式。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子结构混乱。建议使用完整句子，清楚表达没有学过唱歌课程，只是为家人唱歌。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I only sing for my family when I feel like it.

提案: 回答表达了想为家人唱歌的原因，但语法和用词不够准确。建议注意时态和单复数，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I want to sing for my family because they always support me when I face problems, and I love them very much.

提案: 回答中有多处发音和拼写错误，句子不完整且表达混乱。建议练习发音，使用完整句子，并清晰表达观点。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because different songs can match different emotions and help people feel better.

× Yes, I like singing because when I sing I can relieve my heart and and can lose my emotions and it can makes me feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I sing I can relieve my heart and lose my emotions and it can make me feel relaxed.

句中“can lose”前多了一个“and”，应删除；“it can makes”中“makes”应为原形“make”，因为情态动词后动词用原形。

× No, I never, I never take a singing lesson.

✓ No, I have never taken a singing lesson.

表达过去经历时应使用现在完成时，且“take”的过去分词是“taken”。

× I only see when we when I want to sing.

✓ I only sing when I want to sing.

句子结构混乱，“see”应为“sing”，且多余的“when we”应删除。

× whenever I met the problem my family always support me so I always want to sing for my family and I love them.

✓ Whenever I meet a problem, my family always supports me, so I always want to sing for my family and I love them.

“met”应为一般现在时“meet”，因为描述习惯动作；“support”应加第三人称单数“supports”，与主语“family”一致。

× Yes, I think seeing can bring hammers to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people.

“seeing”应为“singing”，且“hammers”应为“happiness”，词汇使用错误。

× You know, different hearings have different feelings.

✓ You know, different hearings have different feelings.

“hearings”应为“hearers”或“people”，但此处未在[Grammar_Problem_Type_List]中定义，故不做修改。

× When they have different different feelings, they always choose different songs to you know what?

✓ When they have different feelings, they always choose different songs, you know?

句中重复“different”应删除一个，且“to you know what?”结构不完整，改为“you know?”更自然。