Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，建议注意句子结构的完整性和正确使用介词，同时避免句子未完成。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式来说明喜欢唱歌的原因。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax when I am alone. Singing allows me to show my personality and relieve stress effectively.

提案: 回答中表达了原因，但语法和用词有些不准确，如“test works”应改为“tests”或“assignments”，并且“a little bit regret”应为“a bit regretful”。建议注意词汇的准确使用和句子流畅性。

例: I have never taken professional singing lessons because I am a law student and need to focus on my studies and exams. However, I do regret not having the chance to learn formally.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“stand”应为“stands”，“seeing”应为“singing”。建议注意动词时态和拼写错误，同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I want to sing for my mom because she always stands by me, especially when I face setbacks or difficulties. Singing is a way to express my gratitude, and if I have the chance, I would love to sing many songs for her.

提案: 回答中存在拼写错误，如“Saying”应为“Singing”，且句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议注意拼写和句子结构，使用更清晰的表达方式。

例: Absolutely, singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and personality, which can uplift both themselves and others around them.

× Am a big fan to singing since singing is a good way to express myself, especially to show my personality to others when I'm staying alone.

✓ I am a big fan of singing since singing is a good way to express myself, especially to show my personality to others when I'm alone.

这里动词短语使用错误，应该用介词短语“a fan of singing”而不是“a fan to singing”。另外，“staying alone”不自然，改为“alone”更合适。

× I like singing to distress and when I'm in the.

✓ I like singing to relieve stress, especially when I'm alone.

“to distress”用法错误，应该用“to relieve stress”表示减压。句子不完整，补充完整表达。

× I've never learned how to sing in the professional way because I'm a student majoring in law, so I have to spend a lot of time to study and do test works.

✓ I've never learned how to sing in a professional way because I'm a student majoring in law, so I have to spend a lot of time studying and doing test work.

“in the professional way”应改为“in a professional way”，冠词使用错误。动词“study”和“do”后应接动名词形式，改为“studying”和“doing”。“test works”应为不可数名词“test work”。

× It's a little bit regret for me.

✓ It's a little bit regrettable for me.

“regret”是动词，句中应使用形容词“regrettable”来表达遗憾的意思。

× I want to sing for my mom because she always stand there and support me especially when I make some setbacks or feel trouble.

✓ I want to sing for my mom because she always stands there and supports me, especially when I have some setbacks or feel troubled.

主语是第三人称单数“she”，动词应加-s，改为“stands”和“supports”。“make some setbacks”表达不当，改为“have some setbacks”。“feel trouble”应改为“feel troubled”。

× So seeing is a way to show my gratitude for her.

✓ So singing is a way to show my gratitude to her.

“seeing”应为“singing”，动词拼写错误。介词“for”改为“to”更符合表达习惯。

× If I have the chance, I would like to sing a lot of songs for her.

✓ If I have the chance, I would like to sing many songs for her.

“a lot of”虽非严格错误，但“many”更正式且符合语境。

× Saying absolutely is a good way to bring happiness and express the emotion of yours or others because in the process of seeing you can show your personality and express your happiness to people.

✓ Singing absolutely is a good way to bring happiness and express your own or others' emotions because in the process of singing you can show your personality and express your happiness to people.

“Saying”应为“singing”，动词拼写错误。表达“the emotion of yours or others”不自然，改为“your own or others' emotions”。“in the process of seeing”应为“in the process of singing”。