Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn.

例: No, I don't like singing because I think I am not good at it. My voice sounds bad, and I often laugh at myself when I sing.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích ngắn gọn, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

例: I like music, but I have never learned how to sing. Instead, I prefer playing instruments and listening to music to improve my knowledge.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: 'sing carrot cake' không đúng). Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, dùng từ chính xác và câu ngắn gọn hơn.

例: I want to sing for my mom. Sometimes I sing songs at home, especially K-Pop and English songs, to show my love and appreciation for her.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và câu văn mạch lạc. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời logic hơn.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. It helps people relax and reduce stress. For example, singing with friends can create a stronger connection and improve communication.

× I don't have a good, I don't have like available.

✓ I don't have a good voice available.

The phrase 'I don't have a good, I don't have like available' is incomplete and incorrect. The word 'good' needs a noun to modify, such as 'voice'. Also, 'like available' is incorrect and unnecessary. The correct phrase is 'I don't have a good voice available.'

× I don't capable in singing and my voice is so bad when I sing I always laugh at myself and everyone always say I think you don't sing well like that.

✓ I am not capable of singing and my voice is so bad that when I sing, I always laugh at myself and everyone always says, 'I think you don't sing well like that.'

The phrase 'I don't capable in singing' is incorrect; 'capable' is an adjective and should be used with 'am' and 'of' (capable of). Also, 'everyone always say' should be 'everyone always says' to agree with the singular subject. The sentence is long and needs commas for clarity.

× I haven't learned how to sing because I think my skills isn't capable to sing and instead of singing I think I can play instrument or listen to music to expand my brand about singing.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing because I think my skills aren't sufficient to sing, and instead of singing, I think I can play an instrument or listen to music to expand my knowledge about singing.

The phrase 'my skills isn't capable' is incorrect; 'skills' is plural, so 'aren't' should be used. Also, 'capable to sing' is incorrect; 'sufficient to sing' or 'good enough to sing' is better. 'Play instrument' needs an article: 'play an instrument'. 'Expand my brand about singing' is unclear; 'expand my knowledge about singing' is more appropriate.

× But sometimes I sings to my mom because I want to give her a present, because of her love, because of her education.

✓ But sometimes I sing to my mom because I want to give her a present, because of her love, because of her education.

The verb 'sings' is incorrect with the subject 'I'. The correct form is 'I sing' (first person singular).

× For instance, when you are in a vegetation, if you have music, you can be happier and connect to each other more.

✓ For instance, when you are in a garden, if you have music, you can be happier and connect with each other more.

The word 'vegetation' is incorrect here; 'garden' or 'nature' is more appropriate. Also, 'connect to each other' should be 'connect with each other' as 'connect with' is the correct preposition.

× Easy is a way to communication.

✓ Singing is an easy way to communicate.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Easy is a way to communication' lacks a subject and proper verb form. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses correct grammar.