Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，且表达略显重复。建议使用现在时态描述习惯性行为，并避免重复表达“singing”。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I am tired. Also, I enjoy singing songs with my family since they like it too.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“express me myself”应为“express myself”。另外，句子结构可以更流畅，避免重复。

例: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in school, I participated in a choir where I received basic vocal training and learned about pitch and rhythm. These lessons helped me gain confidence and express myself better through music.

提案: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误，如“appreciated”应为“appreciate”，“support and encouragement”前缺少冠词。建议注意时态和冠词的使用。

例: I would like to sing for my family and close friends. Singing for them feels more personal and meaningful because they know me well and appreciate my efforts. Moreover, their support and encouragement motivate me to improve and enjoy the experience even more.

提案: 回答中时态混乱，且表达重复。建议使用现在时态描述普遍事实，避免重复，并丰富内容。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps me feel relaxed and enjoy music. Singing often lifts my mood and makes me feel joyful.

× Yes, I like singing because it can let me feel relaxed when I was tired and I can sing a song with my families because they also like singing.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it can let me feel relaxed when I am tired and I can sing a song with my family because they also like singing.

这里的时间是一般现在时，描述的是习惯性动作，所以“when I was tired”应改为“when I am tired”。另外，“families”应为单数“family”，因为指的是自己的家人。

× Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in school, I took part in a child where I received basic vocal training and learned about pitch and rhythm. Singing lessons helped me improve my confidence and express me myself better through music.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in school, I took part in a choir where I received basic vocal training and learned about pitch and rhythm. Singing lessons helped me improve my confidence and express myself better through music.

“took part in a child”中的“child”应为“choir”（合唱团），是词汇错误。表达“express me myself”重复且错误，应为“express myself”。

× I would like to sing for my family and close friends. Singing for them feels more personal and meaningful because they know me well and appreciated my efforts. Moreover, they support and encouragement motivate me to improve and enjoy the experience even more.

✓ I would like to sing for my family and close friends. Singing for them feels more personal and meaningful because they know me well and appreciate my efforts. Moreover, their support and encouragement motivate me to improve and enjoy the experience even more.

“appreciated”时态错误，应为一般现在时“appreciate”，因为描述的是习惯性事实。短语“they support and encouragement”结构错误，应改为“their support and encouragement”，使用名词所有格。

× Yes I do because when I was singing I can feel very relax and when I was singing I can enjoy the music. So I think singing can bring happiness to people because I I feel happiness.

✓ Yes, I do because when I sing I can feel very relaxed and when I sing I can enjoy the music. So I think singing can bring happiness to people because I feel happiness.

“when I was singing”应改为一般现在时“when I sing”，因为描述的是一般事实。形容词“relax”应为副词“relaxed”修饰动词“feel”。“I I”重复，应删去一个。