Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Yes, I like singing very much. It brings me so much happiness and joy, and I think it's a very relaxing and convenient activity.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Yes, I actually used to go to a singing studio for about 5 or 6 years and I loved it. I used to sing on stage twice a year and it was so stress relieving and it just brought me so much joy.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
I would like to sing for big audiences. It would just bring me so much pleasure and joy and I've actually always wanted to be famous, so that's one of my biggest dreams.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Yes, I absolutely think that singing can bring people happiness because it's just an amazing form of relaxation and personally for me, it brings me so much happiness and joy.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 85.0提案: Your answer is clear and natural, but you could improve by adding a linking word to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a more specific example of why singing is relaxing or convenient.
例: Yes, I like singing very much because it brings me so much happiness and joy. Moreover, it's a very relaxing and convenient activity since I can sing anytime, even when I'm alone at home.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 90.0提案: Your answer is detailed and well-structured. To improve, try to use a linking word to connect your sentences and avoid repeating 'used to' too often.
例: Yes, I actually went to a singing studio for about 5 or 6 years, and I loved it. Additionally, I sang on stage twice a year, which was very stress-relieving and brought me a lot of joy.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 80.0提案: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by using linking words to connect your ideas and by providing more specific reasons or examples about why singing for big audiences appeals to you.
例: I would like to sing for big audiences because it would bring me great pleasure and joy. Furthermore, I've always dreamed of being famous, so performing on large stages is one of my biggest goals.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 85.0提案: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, try to use linking words and provide a more specific explanation or example of how singing brings happiness to people.
例: Yes, I absolutely think that singing can bring people happiness because it is an amazing form of relaxation. For example, when I sing, it helps me reduce stress and feel joyful.
文法
× I actually used to go to a singing studio for about 5 or 6 years and I loved it.
✓ I actually used to go to a singing studio for about 5 or 6 years, and I loved it.
A comma is needed before the conjunction 'and' when it connects two independent clauses to improve sentence clarity and correctness.
× I used to sing on stage twice a year and it was so stress relieving and it just brought me so much joy.
✓ I used to sing on stage twice a year, and it was so stress-relieving, and it just brought me so much joy.
Commas are needed before 'and' when connecting independent clauses. Also, 'stress relieving' should be hyphenated as 'stress-relieving' because it is a compound adjective describing the experience.
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