Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I really like singing because it helps me relax and relieves my stress after a long day.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn.

例: To be honest, music was not a compulsory subject at my school, so I have never learned how to sing professionally.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp.

例: I am an introvert, so I usually sing alone. If I had to sing for someone, I would probably sing for myself.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi lặp từ và ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

例: I think singing can relieve people's stress, but it may not completely bring happiness to everyone.

× Yes, I really like singing because it helps me relax and it's well like it's a way that I used to relieve my stress after a long day.

✓ Yes, I really like singing because it helps me relax and it's like a way that I use to relieve my stress after a long day.

The phrase 'it's well like' is incorrect and redundant. The correct expression is 'it's like'. Also, 'used to' implies a past habit, but the context suggests a current habit, so 'use to' is appropriate here.

× To be honest, in my school music is not a compulsory subject. So since I was a child, children she was a child. I have never learned how to sing professionally.

✓ To be honest, in my school music is not a compulsory subject. So since I was a child, I have never learned how to sing professionally.

The phrase 'children she was a child' is nonsensical and should be removed. The sentence should be clear and concise. The tense 'have never learned' is correct to express an experience from past to present.

× I'm an introvert so whenever I sing I will be alone so if when it comes to a person that want I want to sing for I will definitely think about myself.

✓ I'm an introvert, so whenever I sing I am alone. So when it comes to a person I want to sing for, I will definitely think about myself.

The phrase 'if when it comes to a person that want I want to sing for' is grammatically incorrect and confusing. It should be simplified to 'when it comes to a person I want to sing for'. Also, 'I will be alone' is better as 'I am alone' to express habitual action.

× I I think that singing can re relieve people's stress, but I don't think that it can totally bringing bring happiness to people.

✓ I think that singing can relieve people's stress, but I don't think that it can totally bring happiness to people.

The phrase 'can re relieve' is incorrect; 'can relieve' is correct. Also, 'can totally bringing bring' is incorrect; the modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form 'bring', not the '-ing' form.