Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains hesitations and some grammatical errors. Try to speak more fluently and use correct grammar. For example, say "I don't like singing because I don't have the talent to sing." Also, avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to sound more natural.

例: No, I don't like singing because I don't have the talent for it.

提案: Your answer is fragmented and has grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and use past tense correctly. For example, "Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child. I went to a singing teacher, but she told me I did not have talent."

例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child. I went to a singing teacher, but she told me I did not have talent.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more fluent and grammatically correct. Avoid repeating phrases and use linking words. For example, "I don't want to sing for anyone because, as I said, I don't have the talent, so I can't sing."

例: I don't want to sing for anyone because, as I said, I don't have the talent, so I can't sing.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your opinion clearly and provide reasons. For example, "I think singing can bring happiness to people because music often makes me feel joyful and relaxed."

例: I think singing can bring happiness to people because music often makes me feel joyful and relaxed.

× No, I don't like singing because I don't have umm. Don't, uh, talent to sing.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I don't have, um, the talent to sing.

The pronoun 'Don't' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'the' to specify the noun 'talent'. Also, 'umm' and 'uh' are fillers and should be minimized for clarity.

× Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was a child. I go, I went to them. Sing teacher So she told me that I did not have a talent.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was a child, I went to a singing teacher. She told me that I did not have talent.

The sentence has incorrect verb tense and structure. 'I go' should be 'I went' to match past tense. 'Them' is incorrect pronoun; it should be 'a' or 'the' before 'singing teacher'. Also, sentence fragments should be combined properly.

× I don't want to sing for anyone because I as I said, I don't have a talent so I Can't Sing. It's simple.

✓ I don't want to sing for anyone because, as I said, I don't have talent, so I can't sing. It's simple.

The phrase 'I as I said' is incorrect; it should be 'as I said'. Also, 'Can't Sing' should be lowercase 'can't sing' for proper grammar and capitalization.

× I think I think you can bring happiness to people because when I listen to the music, it. Very. Old for.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people because when I listen to music, it makes me feel good.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I think I think you can bring happiness' is repetitive and confusing. 'It. Very. Old for.' is nonsensical and should be replaced with a clear expression of feeling.