Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Well, actually I really enjoy listening to the music, but actually I, I don't like singing don't because it's not because I don't love it, just because I couldn't find the right tone at that time. So it's difficult for me to learn.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Hmm, well, actually not When I was a child, I learned how to play the piano and how to play the guitar, but I don't have some classes about how to sing. So As for me, it is very difficult for me to find the right tone, so I don't have this experience.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
Well, if I have a chance, I really want to sing a song for my parents to express, to express my thank to them. Because I think music is one of the best way for me to express my own emotions. So if I could sing to them, they will love me and I will love them.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Yes, of course although it is difficult for me to sing a song beautifully, I still enjoy spending time with my friends in KTV because I think as soon as we singing, we could feel the different emotions and express our.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 65.0提案: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复使用"actually"，并且注意语法的正确性。可以直接表达喜欢听音乐但唱歌有困难的原因。
例: I enjoy listening to music very much, but I don't like singing because I find it hard to hit the right notes.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中有语法和表达不流畅的问题，建议使用更简洁的句子，并且注意时态和冠词的使用。可以直接说明没有学过唱歌，但学过乐器，并解释原因。
例: No, I haven't taken singing lessons. When I was a child, I learned to play the piano and guitar, but singing has always been difficult for me because I struggle to find the right pitch.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答表达了情感，但句子结构有些重复和不够连贯。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并注意语法，如冠词和单复数。
例: If I had the chance, I would like to sing a song for my parents to show my gratitude because music is a great way to express emotions.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 68.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和句子不完整的问题。建议注意句子完整性和时态一致，使用连接词使表达更连贯。
例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. Even though I can't sing well, I enjoy singing with my friends at KTV because it helps us express different emotions.
文法
× I think as soon as we singing, we could feel the different emotions and express our.
✓ I think as soon as we sing, we can feel different emotions and express ourselves.
这里的 'we singing' 是动词的现在分词形式，但在此句中应使用动词原形 'sing'，因为 'as soon as' 引导的时间状语从句中需要用一般现在时。'could' 改为 'can' 更符合表达习惯，表示能力或可能性。'express our' 不完整，应该是 'express ourselves'，即反身代词，表示表达我们自己。
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