Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构稍显重复，且表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免重复使用“usually”。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it allows me to express my feelings easily. For instance, I often sing with my friends to have a good time together.

提案: 回答中语法和表达存在错误，句子不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，清晰表达未来的学习意愿。

例: No, I haven't had the chance to learn singing professionally, but I hope to pursue it passionately someday.

提案: 回答内容丰富，但句子结构复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I want to sing for people who support me, like my friends and family. For example, I sang for my mother on her birthday, which made me very happy.

提案: 回答中有语法和用词错误，表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I believe singing together can lift people's spirits and make them feel happier. Therefore, it's a wonderful way to bring joy to others.

× But I think one day I'm more passionately about learning about it.

✓ But I think one day I will be more passionate about learning it.

这里使用了错误的情态动词结构，'I'm more passionately'是不正确的表达。应使用将来时态的情态动词 'will be' 来表达未来的意愿或状态，同时 'passionately' 是副词，需改为形容词 'passionate' 来修饰主语。建议使用 'will be more passionate' 来表达未来的情感状态。

× last my mother's birthday, I sing songs for my mother which makes me happy.

✓ Last my mother's birthday, I sang songs for my mother which made me happy.

描述过去发生的事情时，动词应使用过去式。'sing' 和 'makes' 应分别改为过去式 'sang' 和 'made'。此外，'last my mother's birthday' 应改为 'last mother's birthday' 或 'on my mother's last birthday' 更自然。

× No, because I don't have an opportunity to learn about it professionally.

✓ No, because I don't have an opportunity to learn it professionally.

动词 'learn' 后通常直接跟宾语，不需要介词 'about'。'learn about' 通常用于学习某个主题的知识，而这里指的是学习唱歌的技能，直接用 'learn it' 更合适。

× I want to sing songs to many people for their support, such as my friends, my parents and my relatives, and for example, last my mother's birthday, I sing songs for my mother which makes me happy.

✓ I want to sing songs for many people to thank them for their support, such as my friends, my parents and my relatives. For example, on my mother's last birthday, I sang songs for my mother which made me happy.

'sing songs to many people for their support' 介词使用不当，应改为 'sing songs for many people to thank them for their support'。此外，句子过长且结构混乱，建议拆分为两句。'last my mother's birthday' 应改为 'on my mother's last birthday'。

× So I think it's a great way to bring happiness for people.

✓ So I think it's a great way to bring happiness to people.

固定搭配是 'bring happiness to someone'，介词应为 'to' 而非 'for'。这里的错误属于介词使用错误，需改正。