Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“to singing”应为“to sing”，“active”应为“activity”。建议注意动词形式和词汇准确性，同时避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax after a busy day. Sometimes, I like to sing with my friends, which strengthens our relationships and makes the experience more enjoyable. Overall, singing is a fun and meaningful activity for me.

提案: 回答中存在拼写错误，如“systemic”应为“systematic”，以及冠词使用错误，“A chorus”应为“a chorus”。建议注意拼写和冠词的正确使用，并使句子更流畅。

例: Well, I haven't learned to sing in a systematic way, but I attended a chorus when I was in primary school. It was a memorable experience and I think it helped me learn some singing skills.

提案: 回答中出现了语法错误和不完整的句子，如“when I feel suggested”应为“when I feel stressed”，句子未完成。建议注意句子完整性和词汇准确性，避免语法错误。

例: Well, to be honest, I usually prefer singing along rather than performing for others. Singing to myself helps me relax and unwind after a busy day, and it's a great way to express my emotions privately. For example, when I feel stressed, singing quietly by myself can lift my mood.

提案: 回答中存在词汇使用错误，如“delight, delighted lyrics”表达不准确，句子结构混乱且重复。建议使用准确的词汇表达，并简洁明了地阐述观点。

例: Yes, definitely. Many songs have joyful lyrics and melodies that can bring happiness to people. Moreover, when people sing together, they can share their positive emotions with others.

× Sometimes I like to singing with my friends, which makes our relationship stronger and more enjoyable.

✓ Sometimes I like to sing with my friends, which makes our relationship stronger and more enjoyable.

动词 'like' 后面接动词不定式时，应该用原形动词 'sing'，而不是动名词 'singing'。这里 'to' 是不定式标志，后面应接动词原形。

× Overall, singing is a fun and meaningful active for me.

✓ Overall, singing is a fun and meaningful activity for me.

单词 'active' 是形容词，表示“活跃的”，而句中需要一个名词来表示“活动”，正确词应为 'activity'。

× Well, I didn't learn how to sing in a systemic way, but I have attended A chorus when I was in primary school and I think that's a memorable experience and I think it's kind of learning.

✓ Well, I didn't learn how to sing in a systematic way, but I attended a chorus when I was in primary school and I think that's a memorable experience and I think it's a kind of learning.

1. 'systemic' 应为 'systematic'，表示“系统的”；2. 句中 'have attended' 与过去时间状语 'when I was in primary school' 不搭配，应该用一般过去时 'attended'；3. 'A chorus' 中 'A' 应小写 'a'；4. 'kind of learning' 前应加冠词 'a'。

× For example, when I feel suggested, singing quietly by myself can lift my mood and.

✓ For example, when I feel sad, singing quietly by myself can lift my mood.

1. 'suggested' 是动词过去分词，语境中应使用形容词 'sad' 表示“难过”；2. 句子末尾不完整，去掉多余的 'and'。

× Yes, definitely, many songs have delight, delighted lyrics and melody, and it will definitely make people bring happiness to people, and sometimes people singing together can also express their happy emotions to more people.

✓ Yes, definitely, many songs have delightful lyrics and melody, and they definitely bring happiness to people, and sometimes people singing together can also express their happy emotions to more people.

1. 'delight' 是名词或动词，形容词应为 'delightful'；2. 'it will definitely make people bring happiness to people' 结构不通顺，改为 'they definitely bring happiness to people'；3. 主语 'songs' 是复数，谓语动词应用复数形式 'bring'。