Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Yes, I really like singing because it helped me relax and express my emotion. Sometime it can save my mood.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
No.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
Oh, I want to sing for all my people who I love.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people for example, when I feel bored, my friend and I often go to karaoke park and singing together make me feel more happy and.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 70.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn thay vì thì quá khứ để diễn tả sở thích hiện tại. Ngoài ra, bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
例: Yes, I really like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Sometimes, it can improve my mood when I feel stressed or tired.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 40.0提案: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không cung cấp thêm thông tin bổ sung. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích lý do hoặc chia sẻ kinh nghiệm liên quan để câu trả lời tự nhiên và đầy đủ hơn.
例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I enjoy singing casually with my friends.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 65.0提案: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "all my people". Bạn nên sử dụng từ ngữ phù hợp và thêm chi tiết để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
例: I want to sing for all the people I love, such as my family and close friends, to make them happy.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 60.0提案: Câu trả lời bị ngắt quãng và thiếu sự liên kết mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn và hoàn chỉnh câu trả lời với ý tưởng rõ ràng.
例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I feel bored, my friends and I often go to karaoke parks, and singing together makes me feel much happier and more relaxed.
文法
× Yes, I really like singing because it helped me relax and express my emotion.
✓ Yes, I really like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.
The sentence mixes present tense 'like' with past tense 'helped'. Since the liking is current, the verb should be in present tense 'helps'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to refer generally to feelings.
× Sometime it can save my mood.
✓ Sometimes it can improve my mood.
The word 'Sometime' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'save my mood' is unnatural; 'improve my mood' is more appropriate.
× Oh, I want to sing for all my people who I love.
✓ Oh, I want to sing for all the people I love.
The phrase 'all my people' is awkward; 'all the people I love' is clearer and more natural. Also, 'who I love' is better as 'I love' without 'who' in this context.
× my friend and I often go to karaoke park and singing together make me feel more happy and.
✓ my friend and I often go to the karaoke park and sing together, which makes me feel happier.
After 'and', the verb should be in base form 'sing' not 'singing'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'singing together' or better rephrased. 'More happy' should be 'happier'. The sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring.
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