Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I really interesting”应为“I am really interested”。建议注意主谓一致和句子结构，同时避免冗余，表达更简洁自然。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieves my stress.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰且语法错误较多，如“improve me”应为“improve myself”。建议直接回答问题，并用连词连接理由，使表达更连贯。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I have a lot of homework and I need to participate in competitions to improve myself.

提案: 回答中“she is very hard”表达不准确，应为“she works very hard”。建议使用更准确的词汇，并用连词使句子更流畅。

例: I want to sing for my mother because she works very hard and has helped me develop interests like playing the piano. Singing for her is my way to show gratitude.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“Seeing”应为“Singing”，“sing songs”应为“singing songs”。建议注意词汇的正确使用，并使句子结构更自然。

例: Singing is a good way to bring happiness to people because it helps reduce stress and keeps them calm and peaceful.

× I really interesting.

✓ I am really interested.

这里需要用形容词的过去分词形式表示感兴趣的状态，'interesting'是现在分词，表示令人感兴趣的，应该用' interested'表示自己感兴趣。

× This is because I think it makes me relax and peaceful is help me release some stress.

✓ This is because I think it makes me relaxed and peaceful and helps me release some stress.

句子结构混乱，缺少连词，且形容词用法错误。'relax'应为形容词'relaxed'，'peaceful'前应加连词'and'，动词'help'应为第三人称单数形式'helps'。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt'是英式英语过去式，'learned'是美式英语过去分词，两者均可，但为了统一风格，建议使用'learned'。

× I have to take part in some competitions to improve me.

✓ I have to take part in some competitions to improve myself.

反身代词使用错误，'me'应改为反身代词'myself'，表示动作作用于自己。

× she is very hard and she helped me learn some interest like playing piano

✓ she is very hardworking and she helped me learn some interests like playing the piano

'hard'用作形容词表示'困难的'，此处应使用'hardworking'表示'勤奋的'。'interest'应为复数形式'interests'，'playing piano'前应加定冠词'the'。

× I want to sing to show my gratitude.

✓ I want to sing to show my gratitude.

该句无语法错误，无需修改。

× Seeing is a good way to extend happiness to everyone because sing songs can help people reduce stress and keep them calm and peaceful.

✓ Singing is a good way to spread happiness to everyone because singing songs can help people reduce stress and keep them calm and peaceful.

'Seeing'应为动名词'singing'，'extend happiness'搭配不当，改为'spread happiness'更自然。