Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
I dislike singing because I think I didn't have a good voice.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
No, I never learned how to sing and I don't want to learn it because I don't like singing, so I don't think it's really useful for me.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
Like I said earlier, I don't like singing so I don't want to sing for anyone, but if I should sing for someone it's usually for a birthday.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because they usually singing for a birthday party or during a festival and these two examples are happy occasionally.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 65.0提案: Essayez d'utiliser des phrases plus naturelles et complètes pour exprimer votre opinion. Par exemple, commencez par une phrase claire, puis expliquez votre raison avec un détail supplémentaire pour rendre la réponse plus fluide et naturelle.
例: I don't really enjoy singing because I believe my voice isn't very good. For instance, I often feel shy when I try to sing in front of others.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 70.0提案: Pour améliorer, essayez de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale suivie d'une explication claire, en évitant la répétition. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre la réponse plus cohérente.
例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't enjoy it. Therefore, I don't see the point in taking lessons.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 75.0提案: Il serait bénéfique d'éviter de répéter des phrases précédentes et d'ajouter plus de détails spécifiques pour enrichir la réponse. Utilisez des connecteurs pour mieux organiser vos idées.
例: As I mentioned, I don't usually sing for anyone. However, if I had to, it would probably be for a close friend or family member's birthday to make the occasion special.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 60.0提案: Améliorez la grammaire et la clarté en reformulant la réponse. Utilisez des exemples précis et des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus naturelle et convaincante.
例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because people often sing at joyful events like birthday parties or festivals, which create a cheerful atmosphere.
文法
× I dislike singing because I think I didn't have a good voice.
✓ I dislike singing because I think I don't have a good voice.
The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'didn't have' when referring to a current belief about the voice. The present tense 'don't have' should be used to express a current state or opinion.
× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because they usually singing for a birthday party or during a festival and these two examples are happy occasionally.
✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because they usually sing for a birthday party or during a festival and these two examples are happy occasions.
The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is the base verb 'sing' after 'usually'. Also, 'happy occasionally' is incorrect; it should be 'happy occasions' to refer to events.
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