Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，内容较丰富，但有些表达不够自然，比如“when I see my favorite songs”应为“when I listen to my favorite songs”。建议注意动词搭配，避免用词错误，同时可以适当使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and forget about daily worries. Moreover, singing allows me to relax and boosts my mood. For instance, when I listen to my favorite songs, I feel more energetic and less anxious.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够连贯的问题，如“the the lessons of singing is is so expensive just I can't afford it”表达不清晰。建议加强语法准确性，使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复和冗余。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I consider singing just a hobby. Also, I don't want to become a professional singer, and the singing classes are quite expensive, so I can't afford them.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但有些句子结构重复且不够简洁，如“when I face difficulties, when I was in trouble, for example, whenever I feel stressed”表达重复。建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词提高表达的连贯性和自然度。

例: I like to sing for my friends and family because they are very important to me. They always support me during difficult times, such as when I feel stressed. Their encouragement makes me feel more confident and happy.

提案: 回答中出现了拼写错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），影响表达的准确性。建议注意拼写和发音的准确性，同时可以增加更多具体细节，使回答更有说服力。

例: Yes, definitely. Singing is a great way for people to relieve stress and feel happier, whether they are working or studying. For example, after a busy day, many people relax by singing, which helps improve their mood and boosts their confidence.

× Actually not, I haven't learned how to sing because I think singing just my hobby.

✓ Actually not, I haven't learned how to sing because I think singing is just my hobby.

句子中缺少了动词“is”，导致句子结构不完整。应在“singing”和“just my hobby”之间加上“is”表示“唱歌只是我的爱好”。

× the the lessons of singing is is so expensive just I can't afford it.

✓ the lessons of singing are so expensive that I can't afford them.

“lessons”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。另外，“is is”重复，应改为“are”。“just”用法不当，应改为“that”引导结果状语从句。

× seeing is a wonderful way for people to release stress and feel happy, whether they are working or studying.

✓ singing is a wonderful way for people to release stress and feel happy, whether they are working or studying.

原句中“seeing”应为“singing”，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。

× the the lessons of singing is is so expensive just I can't afford it.

✓ the lessons of singing are so expensive that I can't afford them.

“lessons of singing”中的“of”用法正确，但句子后半部分“just I can't afford it”中“just”用法不当，应改为“that”引导结果状语从句。

× the the lessons of singing is is so expensive just I can't afford it.

✓ the lessons of singing are so expensive that I can't afford them.

“it”指代不明确，应改为复数代词“them”指代“lessons”。