Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 答えが不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。例えば、「when I singing」ではなく「when I sing」と言うべきです。また、内容が曖昧で意味が伝わりにくいので、理由を明確にし、簡潔に答える練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. I also enjoy listening to loud music while singing.

提案: 文法の誤りが目立ちます。例えば、「I just learn」ではなく「I just learnED」や「sometimes」などのスペルミスに注意しましょう。また、回答が長すぎるので、簡潔にまとめることを意識してください。

例: No, I haven't taken formal lessons. I usually practice singing by myself at home or in the car, and sometimes I go to karaoke with my friends.

提案: 質問の意図を理解していないようです。「誰に歌いたいか」という質問に対して、好きな歌手について話しています。文法や語彙の誤りも多いので、質問に直接答え、文法を正しく使う練習をしましょう。

例: I want to sing for my family because they always support me and I want to make them happy.

提案: 内容は理解できますが、文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「express the motion」ではなく「express emotions」と言うべきです。より自然で明確な表現を練習しましょう。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and enjoy their feelings.

× I like singing because when I singing I can use masters in.

✓ I like singing because when I sing I can use masters in.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used after 'when I'. The correct form is the base verb 'sing' to indicate the action in the present tense after 'when I'.

× One of my favorite things to do is singing and I will love loud music so I like singing.

✓ One of my favorite things to do is singing, and I love loud music, so I like singing.

The phrase 'I will love' is incorrect here; 'I love' is the correct present tense form. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate clauses properly.

× No, I didn't learn how to sing, I just learn by myself without music in my car or in the house and I just practice more and more.

✓ No, I didn't learn how to sing; I just learned by myself without music in my car or in the house, and I just practiced more and more.

The verbs 'learn' and 'practice' should be in the past tense 'learned' and 'practiced' to match the past tense auxiliary 'didn't'.

× And sometime I went to the karaoke to sing by myself or with my friends.

✓ And sometimes I went to karaoke to sing by myself or with my friends.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'karaoke' does not need 'the' before it in this context.

× I liked the season to sing for because my favorite singer is little season.

✓ I like the season to sing for because my favorite singer is Little Season.

The verb 'liked' should be 'like' to express a current preference. Also, 'Little Season' should be capitalized as a proper noun.

× I really prefer listening his song because lyrics is really good and I like the tone and rhythm so I really like to hear listen to his songs.

✓ I really prefer listening to his songs because the lyrics are really good, and I like the tone and rhythm, so I really like to listen to his songs.

The verb 'listening' requires the preposition 'to'. 'Lyrics' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. The phrase 'hear listen' is redundant; 'listen' alone is sufficient.

× Yes, I do. I think singing can bring happiness to people because music can.

✓ Yes, I do. I think singing can bring happiness to people because music can express emotions.

The sentence 'because music can.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'express emotions' completes the thought and clarifies the meaning.

× They can express the motion during the singing and they may enjoy their feelings and something are they thinking.

✓ People can express emotions during singing, and they may enjoy their feelings and thoughts.

The pronoun 'they' is vague; specifying 'people' clarifies the subject. 'Motion' should be 'emotion'. The phrase 'something are they thinking' is incorrect; 'thoughts' is the correct noun.

× So I think bring singing can bring happiness to people.

✓ So I think singing can bring happiness to people.

The phrase 'bring singing' is incorrect; 'singing' alone is the subject. Removing 'bring' before 'singing' corrects the sentence structure.