Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer wa eigo de shizen de wakariyasui you ni shite kudasai. Kotae wa mondai ni chokusetsu kotae, jisho teki na kotoba o tsukatte, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I like singing because it helps me relax when I feel stressed. My favorite songs cheer me up and make me feel better.' to iu fuu ni kotaete kudasai.

例: I like singing because it helps me relax when I feel stressed. My favorite songs cheer me up and make me feel better.

提案: Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, mondai ni chokusetsu kotaete kudasai. Fuyou na kotoba ya fukuzatsu na bunshou wa sakan ni shite, wakariyasui kotoba de kotaete kudasai. Tatoeba, 'No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I enjoy singing along with my neighbors sometimes.' to iu fuu ni kotaete kudasai.

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I enjoy singing along with my neighbors sometimes.

提案: Kotae wa motto rikai shi yasui you ni, mondai ni chokusetsu kotaete kudasai. Rikai o fukameru tame ni, riyuu ya jissai no jirei o tsukatte kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I want to sing for myself because singing cheers me up and makes me feel happy.' to iu fuu ni kotaete kudasai.

例: I want to sing for myself because singing cheers me up and makes me feel happy.

提案: Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Riyuu o teinei ni setsumei shi, rikai o fukameru tame ni, riyuu ya jirei o tsukatte kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them express their feelings and enjoy themselves.' to iu fuu ni kotaete kudasai.

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them express their feelings and enjoy themselves.

× Especially my favorite song, it helps me a difference and. And much special up.

✓ Especially my favorite song helps me feel different and much better.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks proper sentence structure and connectors. The correction combines the ideas into a coherent sentence, clarifying the meaning and improving flow.

× No, I have not. Never. Neighbor and singing I sync. I sing a song with. Is my, is my listen.

✓ No, I have not. I never learned. I sing along with my neighbors. I sing songs that I listen to.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain unclear phrases. The correction restructures the sentences to convey the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× I want to sing a song for myself because singing a song, singing a song. Cheers me up. So. Yes.

✓ I want to sing a song for myself because singing cheers me up.

The original sentence is repetitive and fragmented. The correction removes redundancy and combines the ideas into a clear, concise sentence.

× Because. Because. Singing make people happy.

✓ Because singing makes people happy.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving singular and plural forms.