Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to make your sentences more natural and avoid repeating the same phrase. Also, explain clearly why you like singing using simple and correct grammar.

例: Yes, I like singing because music makes me feel peaceful and free. It helps me relax and express my emotions.

提案: Your answer is fragmented and lacks clear structure. Try to answer directly and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, use correct verb tenses and grammar.

例: Yes, I have learned how to sing by watching helpful videos on YouTube. I feel proud when I can sing a song well.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to answer the question directly by mentioning the person or group you want to sing for, and explain why.

例: I want to sing for my family because I love sharing my passion for singing with them.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to explain clearly how singing brings happiness using simple and correct sentences.

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it makes people feel peaceful and joyful when they enjoy the music.

× Yes, I like, I like to, I like singing and because music are very, very peaceful, Ann. Being free.

✓ Yes, I like singing because music is very, very peaceful, Ann. It makes me feel free.

The noun 'music' is uncountable and should be treated as singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, the sentence structure was fragmented and redundant; simplifying improves clarity.

× Yes, I learn. How I learn how to sing music. In. YouTube are very helpful. Proud to sing a song.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing. YouTube is very helpful. I am proud to sing a song.

The verb 'learn' should be in the past tense 'have learned' to indicate completed action. 'YouTube' is singular, so 'is' is correct. Sentence fragments were corrected for clarity.

× Yes, sometimes I for sing a song. Because I love I singing a song.

✓ Yes, sometimes I sing a song because I love singing.

The phrase 'I for sing' is incorrect; it should be 'I sing'. The sentence was fragmented and redundant; combining into one clear sentence improves understanding.

× Yes. Yes, because things song is very peaceful an like to very inner. Very peaceful, Ann. People are enjoying a song.

✓ Yes, because songs are very peaceful and bring inner peace. People enjoy songs.

The phrase 'things song' is unclear; likely meant 'songs'. 'Song' should be plural to match 'things' or 'songs'. Also, sentence fragments were corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.