Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，导致意思难以理解。建议简洁明了地表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并注意语法和句子结构。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. I especially enjoy singing English songs because I like their melodies and lyrics.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并简要说明原因，注意句子完整性。

例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing because I am not very interested in studying it. Singing is just a hobby for me.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法错误多，逻辑不清。建议直接回答想为谁唱歌，并说明原因，使用连贯的句子。

例: If I had to choose, I would like to sing for my parents because I feel comfortable with them. Singing in front of strangers makes me feel embarrassed.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但句子结构不够流畅，语法错误较多。建议简化句子，使用连贯的表达方式，明确说明唱歌带来的积极影响。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness. When I feel stressed or upset, listening to music cheers me up and helps me relax.

× I like to listen music, especially for some English music

✓ I like to listen to music, especially some English music

动词 listen 后面应接介词 to，表示“听某物”，不能直接接名词。

× Actually, I would say no, she just because I'm not very, very interested in study it.

✓ Actually, I would say no, just because I'm not very, very interested in studying it.

句中出现了多余的代词 she，且动词 study 应使用动名词形式 studying。

× I'm not very, very interested in study it.

✓ I'm not very, very interested in studying it.

介词 in 后应接动名词形式，study 应改为 studying。

× I think it's my parent because if if you if you someone needs me to see in a public or saying for a stranger, I would.

✓ I think it's my parents because if someone needs me to sing in public or sing for a stranger, I would.

parent 应为复数 parents；in a public 应为 in public；动词 say 应为 sing。

× if you someone needs me to see in a public or saying for a stranger

✓ if someone needs me to sing in public or sing for a stranger

介词 in public 表示“公开场合”，不加冠词；动词 see 应为 sing。

× if you someone needs me to see in a public or saying for a stranger

✓ if someone needs me to sing in public or sing for a stranger

动词后应使用动词原形 sing，而不是 see 或 saying。

× if I was very stressful, if I was under stressful things or very upset about the some bad results

✓ if I was very stressed, if I was under stressful things or very upset about some bad results

stressful 是形容事物的，表示“有压力的”，应使用形容人的过去分词 stressed 表示“感到压力”；some 前不加定冠词 the。

× very upset about the some bad results

✓ very upset about some bad results

some 前不应加定冠词 the。

× I would prefer to. Listen some music to cheer me up or just made me come down not to think too much about the bad things happened.

✓ I would prefer to listen to some music to cheer me up or just calm me down and not think too much about the bad things that happened.

prefer 后接不定式 listen to；listen 后应加介词 to；made me come down 应改为 calm me down；not to think 应改为 not think；bad things happened 前应加关系代词 that。