Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构不完整，且有重复和断断续续的问题。建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel free and happy. When I sing, I feel confident and enjoy sharing my voice with my friends.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和单复数错误，且表达不够连贯。建议注意时态一致，使用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally. However, I often sing songs with my friends just for fun, and we don't focus on singing techniques.

提案: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，明确表达想为谁唱歌及原因。

例: I want to sing for my friends because they enjoy listening to me. Also, I would like to sing for my idol who has inspired and encouraged me a lot.

提案: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，句子不连贯，词汇使用不当。建议练习使用连贯句子和恰当词汇，清晰表达观点。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When I sing for my friends, I can see that they enjoy and appreciate my voice, which makes me feel happy too.

× I like singing because when I'm seeing song.

✓ I like singing because when I see a song.

这里的动词时态错误，'I'm seeing' 应该用一般现在时 'I see'，因为描述的是习惯性动作。

× I always feel like free.

✓ I always feel free.

短语 'feel like free' 中 'like' 用法错误，'feel free' 是固定搭配，表示感到自由。

× This made me feel like.

✓ This makes me feel free.

句子结构不完整，缺少宾语，且时态应与上下文一致，改为一般现在时。

× I am a. Very good person.

✓ I am a very good person.

句子被错误地拆分，应合并为完整句子。

× That I can show my. Amazing voices to my friends.

✓ That I can show my amazing voice to my friends.

'voices' 应为单数 'voice'，因为一个人通常只有一个声音。

× I haven't learn how to sing a song.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing a song.

现在完成时中，动词应使用过去分词形式，'learn' 应改为 'learned'。

× An We don't talk about the scale of the. Singing a song.

✓ And we don't talk about the scale of singing a song.

'An' 应为连词 'And'，且句子断开不完整，应连贯。

× they always would like to listen my. Voiced

✓ they always would like to listen to my voice.

动词 'listen' 后应加介词 'to'，'voiced' 应为名词 'voice'。

× I. Willard two thing for my idol because he actually gave me a lot of confidence and encourage me a lot.

✓ I will do two things for my idol because he actually gave me a lot of confidence and encouraged me a lot.

'Willard' 应为 'will do'，动词时态和拼写错误，'encourage' 应为过去式 'encouraged'。

× when I'm seeing a song to my friends.

✓ when I sing a song to my friends.

'I'm seeing' 用法错误，应为一般现在时 'I sing'，描述习惯动作。

× they are very. Glad leverage, careful while listening mine. Voice.

✓ they are very glad and careful while listening to my voice.

'Glad leverage' 无意义，应为 'glad and careful'，且 'listening' 后应加介词 'to'，'mine voice' 应为 'my voice'。