Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用有误，建议练习简单句型表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并且注意发音和句子结构。

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy. At school, our music teacher often teaches us songs, which I enjoy very much.

提案: 回答缺乏完整句子和清晰表达，建议用完整句子说明学习唱歌的经历，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I have learned how to sing at school. I think singing classes are very good because they help me improve my skills.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议明确说明想为谁唱歌并说明原因，使用完整句子和连贯表达。

例: I want to sing for my mother because I am very thankful to her for everything she has done for me.

提案: 回答内容不清晰且语法错误较多，建议用简单句表达唱歌如何带来快乐，并举例说明。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and enjoy themselves.

× I like seeing becauses I think seeing and can make me feel happy.

✓ I like singing because I think singing can make me feel happy.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，因为题目是关于唱歌的。动词后接动名词形式表示喜欢做某事。

× Hello I'm. And school. Our music teacher. Open Teach me.

✓ Hello, I'm a student. At school, our music teacher teaches me.

原句结构混乱，缺少主谓宾，需补充完整句子使其通顺。

× Oh, are you really? Learn saying at class.

✓ Oh, really? I learned singing in class.

表示过去发生的动作，动词应使用过去式'learned'。

× I want to say from my mother.

✓ I want to sing for my mother.

动词'sing'后应接介词'for'表示为某人唱歌，'say from'用法错误。

× I'm uh. 18 older.

✓ I'm 18 years old.

表达年龄时应使用'years old'，且'older'用于比较级，不适合此处。

× I'm honestly thankful she.

✓ I'm honestly thankful to her.

表达感谢时应使用介词'to'连接宾语，缺少介词导致句子不完整。

× I think seeing car bring happiness.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness.

'seeing'应为'singing'，且动词后接动名词表示动作，'car'应为'can'。

× Two people becaused.

✓ to people because

'Two'应为'to'表示方向，'becaused'拼写错误，应为'because'。

× Sings. Itself is a. Go to help. Go to Settings.

✓ Singing itself is good to help and to relax.

'Sings'应为动名词'singing'，句子缺少谓语和连词，需补充完整表达。