Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构不完整，表达不够连贯，且有语法错误。建议练习使用完整句子，避免断句，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I definitely like singing because it is a good way for me to relax and unwind. For example, when I feel a little nervous, singing helps me calm down and feel more comfortable.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且内容不够具体。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，清晰表达学习经历，并提供具体细节。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally since I was a child. However, when I was in senior high school, I participated in a singing competition at school and won third prize, which made me think I might have some talent for singing.

提案: 回答内容较好，但句子结构稍显重复，表达可以更简洁自然。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并避免重复表达。

例: I want to sing for my mom because she has been my first teacher throughout my life. Singing is the best way for me to express my love, especially since her birthday is next month and I plan to sing for her then.

提案: 回答中有严重语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议学习正确的表达方式，使用恰当的词汇，并提供具体理由支持观点。

例: Yes, absolutely. Singing is a great way to relieve stress and bring happiness to everyone. People can also relate to the stories in the lyrics and music, which makes singing even more enjoyable.

× Yes, I definitely like singing because I think is a good way for me to relax and unwind.

✓ Yes, I definitely like singing because I think it is a good way for me to relax and unwind.

句子中缺少主语“it”，导致结构不完整。应在think后加上it，构成完整的主谓结构。

× For example, if I feel little nervous.

✓ For example, if I feel a little nervous.

“little”前缺少冠词“a”，表示“一点点”，应使用“a little”修饰不可数名词nervous。

× You're always a little long.

✓ You are always a little nervous.

原句语义不清且结构混乱，应根据上下文改为表达“你总是有点紧张”。

× After that I will I would feel confortable.

✓ After that, I would feel comfortable.

句中出现重复助动词“will I would”，且“confortable”拼写错误，应改为“comfortable”。

× No, I haven't since I was a child.

✓ No, I haven't learned since I was a child.

“haven't”后缺少动词，导致句子不完整，应补充“learned”表示“我从小没有学过”。

× I never learn how to sing it.

✓ I never learned how to sing it.

“learn”应使用过去式“learned”，因为描述的是过去的经历。

× I join our thinking computation in school and family.

✓ I joined our thinking competition in school and family.

“join”应使用过去式“joined”，且“computation”应为“competition”，表示比赛。

× I want the third price, so I think maybe I have some talent about singing.

✓ I wanted the third prize, so I thought maybe I had some talent for singing.

描述过去的想法和愿望，动词应使用过去式；“price”应为“prize”；“talent about”应改为“talent for”。

× I want to sing for my mom because I think she is my first teacher here my whole life and I think this way is the best way for me to express my love for my mom.

✓ I want to sing for my mom because I think she has been my first teacher throughout my whole life, and I think this is the best way for me to express my love for her.

“here”用错，应为“throughout”；句子结构不清晰，需调整表达顺序和代词使用。

× And next month is her birthday. I will sing for her.

✓ And next month is her birthday. I will sing for her.

此句无语法错误，时态使用正确。

× Singing is a good way to suppress Happening is an worms for everyone and people can also find their own stories in some lyrics and musics.

✓ Singing is a good way to suppress happiness and worries for everyone, and people can also find their own stories in some lyrics and music.

“suppress Happening is an worms”语义混乱，应为“suppress happiness and worries”；“musics”不可数名词，应为“music”。