Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và thể hiện cảm xúc cá nhân, nhưng có một số lỗi ngắt quãng và lặp từ không cần thiết. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại các từ như "I think" quá nhiều và kết hợp các câu ngắn thành câu dài hơn để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I've loved singing since I was a child because it brings me happiness and helps me feel relaxed and peaceful. Singing is an important part of my life that I can't imagine living without.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Tránh các câu bị ngắt quãng và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "I never really learn" thành "I have never really learned". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I have never really learned how to sing using a specific technique. I just sing naturally because I believe it's more of a talent. Fortunately, I've received compliments, which makes me very happy.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị ngắt quãng nhiều làm giảm tính tự nhiên. Bạn nên nối các câu ngắn thành câu dài hơn và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

例: I think singing for loved ones, such as family and friends, is wonderful because it connects us and strengthens our relationships. However, since I'm quite shy, I usually avoid singing in front of others.

提案: Bạn đã thể hiện ý tưởng sâu sắc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên tránh các câu ngắt quãng và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn, ví dụ như thay "I think singing not only brings happiness to people. It even connects people." bằng "I think singing not only brings happiness to people but also connects them."

例: I believe singing not only brings happiness to people but also connects them. When we listen to someone singing together, we share the same feelings, which is truly beautiful.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

The verb 'learn' in American English past participle form is 'learned'. 'Learnt' is more common in British English, but 'learned' is widely accepted and preferred in formal contexts. Use consistent verb forms.

× I never really learn how to. Sing in a specific technique.

✓ I never really learned how to sing in a specific technique.

The sentence refers to a past experience, so the past tense 'learned' should be used instead of the present tense 'learn'. Also, the sentence should be combined properly without a period after 'to'.

× I I didn't learn how to do it.

✓ I didn't learn how to do it.

The sentence is correct in tense but contains a repeated word 'I'. Removing the duplicate improves clarity.

× I just do it and I think it's more of a talent.

✓ I just do it, and I think it's more of a talent.

Adding a comma before 'and' improves sentence flow and clarity.

× And it naturally came out.

✓ And it naturally comes out.

Since the speaker is describing a general truth or ongoing ability, present tense 'comes' is more appropriate than past tense 'came'.

× I've also received compliments and I are very happy about it.

✓ I've also received compliments and I am very happy about it.

The pronoun 'I' should be followed by the verb 'am' instead of 'are' to agree in number and person.