Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，且表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和拼写，避免重复表达，且回答应更简洁明了。可以用更自然的表达方式说明自己不喜欢唱歌的原因。

例: Actually, I'm not fond of singing because I think my voice sounds a bit off. Also, my mother once told me that I wasn't good at singing, which made me lose confidence. Therefore, I feel shy and nervous when I have to sing in front of others.

提案: 回答中有多处语法和拼写错误，句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议注意句子完整性，避免拼写错误，并用连词使句子更连贯。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing before. As I mentioned, singing doesn't appeal to me much. Instead, I prefer learning instruments like the piano because it makes me feel confident and comfortable.

提案: 回答表达了基本意思，但存在拼写错误和句子不完整的问题。建议注意拼写，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I would like to sing a birthday song for my best friends and parents. Birthdays are very special days, and I think singing a birthday song can express our congratulations and feelings well.

提案: 回答中有严重的语法和拼写错误，表达不清晰。建议加强语法学习，注意时态和单复数，避免拼写错误，并用更清晰的句子表达观点。

例: Definitely, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Although I don't like singing myself, I have watched others sing before. When they sing their favorite songs, they look very excited and energetic, and I feel happy for a few minutes as well.

× Actually an not fond of saying.

✓ Actually, I am not fond of singing.

句中“an”应为“I am”，且“saying”应为“singing”。这是代词使用错误和词汇错误。应使用第一人称代词“I”并正确拼写动词。

× I think my voice sounds a bit of auto tune

✓ I think my voice sounds a bit like auto-tune.

“a bit of auto tune”表达不正确，应使用“a bit like auto-tune”表示“有点像自动调音”。

× since my mother told me that I was not good as saying.

✓ since my mother told me that I was not good at singing.

“good as saying”应为“good at singing”，介词使用错误，且“saying”应为“singing”。

× I really lose confidence in singing and I feel shy and nervous when I have to sing in front of others.

✓ I really lost confidence in singing and I feel shy and nervous when I have to sing in front of others.

前半句描述过去失去信心，时态应为过去式“lost”。

× No, I haven't learned to sing before.

✓ No, I haven't learned to sing before.

此句无语法错误，符合时态要求。

× As I mentioned before, I think staying doesn't appeal me a lot.

✓ As I mentioned before, I think singing doesn't appeal to me a lot.

“staying”应为“singing”，且“appeal me”应为“appeal to me”，介词使用错误。

× Instead of learning singing at the rather learn the instrument like the piano.

✓ Instead of learning singing, I would rather learn an instrument like the piano.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，需调整为完整句子。

× I think it really brings me confident, comfortable and.

✓ I think it really makes me confident and comfortable.

“brings me confident”应为“makes me confident”，且句子未完成，需补充完整。

× I would like to sing a birthday song for my best friends and parents.

✓ I would like to sing a birthday song for my best friends and my parents.

“parents”前应加所有格“my”，保持一致性。

× And you know, birthday is a very special day, and I think seeing the birthday song can.

✓ And you know, a birthday is a very special day, and I think singing the birthday song can.

“birthday”前应加冠词“a”，且“seeing”应为“singing”。

× Express our congratulations and feelings.

✓ Express our congratulations and feelings.

此句为不完整句，应与前句合并或补充主语谓语。

× Definitely, I believe seeing can brings people hapiness.

✓ Definitely, I believe singing can bring people happiness.

“seeing”应为“singing”，“can brings”应为“can bring”，动词形式错误，“hapiness”拼写错误。

× I am though I don't like seeing but I have ever seen other thing before and I can feel that when they sing the sound a favorite.

✓ Although I don't like singing, I have seen others sing before and I can feel that when they sing, the sound is favorite.

句子结构混乱，“I am though”应为“Although I”，“seeing”应为“singing”，“have ever seen”应为“have seen”，“sound a favorite”表达不清。

× They are very excited and energetic and I feel for few minutes as well.

✓ They are very excited and energetic, and I feel the same for a few minutes as well.

句子缺少宾语，“I feel for few minutes”不完整，应补充“the same”并加冠词“a few minutes”。