Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but a bit short and slightly unnatural. Try to make your response more natural by using correct tense and adding a reason to explain why you like singing. For example, you can say when you started and what you enjoy about it.

例: Yes, I have loved singing since I was a child because it helps me express my emotions and feel happy.

提案: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and is a bit unclear. Use correct past tense and singular/plural forms. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly. For example, mention who taught you and how often you had classes.

例: Yes, when I was in school, my teacher taught me how to sing, and we also had regular singing classes.

提案: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to answer directly who you want to sing for, and explain why. Use correct verb forms and sentence structure. Avoid unclear phrases like 'she is always quoted me'.

例: I want to sing for my mother because she has always encouraged me to pursue this profession.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear opinion and explain why singing brings happiness. Avoid unclear phrases and focus on coherence.

例: Yes, definitely singing brings happiness to people because it can lift their mood and help them relax.

× Yes, I love singing from my childhood.

✓ Yes, I have loved singing since my childhood.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the simple present tense 'love' with a time expression 'from my childhood' which requires the present perfect tense to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Use 'have loved' and 'since' for correct tense and preposition.

× When I was in school my teacher taught me how to sing and they all also give us classes of singing.

✓ When I was in school, my teacher taught me how to sing and they also gave us singing classes.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Give' should be in past tense 'gave' to match 'taught'. Also, 'classes of singing' is better expressed as 'singing classes'. Commas improve clarity.

× My mother encouraged me to singing and I also love this profession and she is always quoted me.

✓ My mother encouraged me to sing and I also love this profession, and she always quotes me.

After 'encouraged me to', the base form 'sing' is required, not the gerund 'singing'. 'She is always quoted me' is incorrect; it should be 'she always quotes me' to indicate habitual action in present tense.

× Yes, definitely singing bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, definitely singing brings happiness to people.

The subject 'singing' is singular, so the verb should be 'brings' to agree in the present tense.

× When I am can I do singing? I felt over Demoan.

✓ When I sing, I feel overjoyed.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'When I am can I do singing?' is incorrect structure; it should be 'When I sing'. 'I felt over Demoan' is unclear; likely intended 'I feel overjoyed' or similar. The correction provides a clear, grammatical sentence conveying the intended meaning.