Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Старайтесь говорить более связно и избегать пауз и повторов. Используйте полные предложения и объясняйте свои мысли более подробно, чтобы ответ звучал естественно и убедительно.

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because I have a good voice and it makes me feel happy and confident.

提案: Обратите внимание на правильное использование слов и грамматики. Постарайтесь давать более точные и понятные ответы, избегая непонятных выражений.

例: Yes, I took singing lessons every Sunday when I was a child to improve my skills.

提案: Используйте правильные слова и выражения, чтобы сделать ответ более понятным. Структурируйте ответ с помощью связующих слов, чтобы он был логичным и плавным.

例: I like to sing for myself because it helps me relax, but I also enjoy singing for others to share my happiness.

提案: Старайтесь строить предложения грамматически правильно и использовать связующие слова для плавности речи. Добавляйте конкретные причины и примеры для поддержки своих идей.

例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people relax and can reduce feelings of depression.

× Yes, I like singing because, uh, I, I have a good. Voice and it's cool.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I have a good voice and it's cool.

The original sentence has unnecessary pauses and a period in the middle of a sentence, which breaks the sentence structure. Removing the pauses and combining the sentence properly improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, when I was a child I had a scene questions. At every. Every Sunday.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had singing lessons every Sunday.

The phrase 'had a scene questions' is incorrect and unclear. It seems the student meant 'singing lessons'. Also, 'At every. Every Sunday.' is fragmented and incorrect. Correcting to 'every Sunday' and using the past tense 'had' properly forms a clear sentence.

× For myself, I enjoy when I sync for somebody, but when I think for myself, it's relaxed it for me.

✓ For myself, I enjoy singing for somebody, but when I sing for myself, it's relaxing for me.

The verb 'sync' is incorrect; it should be 'sing'. The preposition 'for' is correct with 'singing for somebody'. Also, 'it's relaxed it for me' is incorrect; it should be 'it's relaxing for me' to describe the feeling properly.

× Yes, I think so. I think when we think we feel relaxed. And it's helped people too. Don't feel depressed.

✓ Yes, I think so. I think when we sing, we feel relaxed. And it helps people not to feel depressed.

The word 'think' is incorrectly used instead of 'sing'. Also, 'it's helped people too' should be 'it helps people' to maintain present tense and subject-verb agreement. 'Don't feel depressed' is a fragment; it should be connected properly as 'not to feel depressed'.