Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，建议注意句子结构的完整性和用词准确性，例如“infect other with my”表达不清晰，应改为“inspire others with my singing”。同时，回答应更自然流畅，避免重复和不必要的词汇。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions and connect with others through music.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“videos content on the fiction world”和“my same skills”表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

例: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I often watch online tutorials to improve my singing skills.

提案: 回答不完整，最后一句话未表达完整意思。建议完整表达想法，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。例如，说明为什么想为家人唱歌以及唱歌带来的意义。

例: I want to sing for my family because they spend the most time with me and always support me. Singing for them is my way of showing gratitude and love.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“lyrics are infection”和“People can get the emotions from”表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和完整的句子表达观点。

例: Yes, singing can definitely bring happiness to people. When a song has meaningful lyrics and a beautiful melody, it can evoke strong emotions and uplift listeners.

× I have never learned singing from a teacher.

✓ I have never learned to sing from a teacher.

动词learn后面应接不定式to do，而不是动名词doing。这里应使用learn to sing表示学习唱歌。

× However, I often explore videos content on the fiction world to try to improve my same skills.

✓ However, I often explore video content in the fictional world to try to improve my singing skills.

videos content应为video content，fiction world应为fictional world，表示虚构的世界。my same skills表达不正确，应为my singing skills，表示唱歌技能。

× And can infect other with my.

✓ And I can infect others with my singing.

句子缺少主语和宾语，且动词用法错误。应补充主语I，动词用can infect，宾语others，后面加上with my singing，完整表达感染他人。

× So I want to use my voice to.

✓ So I want to use my voice to express my feelings.

句子不完整，缺少动词和宾语。应补充完整表达，说明用声音做什么。

× Sing can absolutely bring joy to other people.

✓ Singing can absolutely bring joy to other people.

动名词singing用作主语时表示动作，单词sing是动词原形，不能直接作主语。

× For example, when a voice is good and the lyrics are infection.

✓ For example, when a voice is good and the lyrics are infectious.

形容词infection是名词，形容词形式应为infectious，表示有感染力的。

× People can get the emotions from.

✓ People can get the emotions from the song.

句子缺少宾语，导致表达不完整。应补充宾语the song，表示人们从歌曲中获得情感。

× Not only they spend most time with me, but they also show the most love to me.

✓ Not only do they spend most of the time with me, but they also show the most love to me.

使用not only...but also结构时，主语和助动词倒装，且most time应为most of the time。