Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在较多错误，导致意思不清晰。建议练习简单句的结构，避免重复和语法错误，同时用更自然的表达方式说明自己不喜欢唱歌的原因。

例: I don't often sing because I think I don't have a good voice. Also, singing well requires some talent, which I feel I lack.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用完整句子表达原因，并且避免使用不准确的词汇。可以明确说明没有学唱歌的原因，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I am not good at it. Also, I don't have enough time or money to take singing lessons.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议先直接回答问题，然后用简洁的句子说明原因，避免断句错误。

例: I want to sing for myself because I am not confident enough to sing for others. Singing for myself makes me feel comfortable.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，句子不连贯。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并用连接词使内容连贯。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. When I feel down, I often listen to my favorite songs and sing along. Music helps me relax and feel peaceful.

× Well, I don't quite often things 'cause I think I don't think that I have a good voice for thing and I also think that it needs a little bit talents to sing well.

✓ Well, I don't sing quite often because I think I don't have a good voice for singing and I also think that it needs a little bit of talent to sing well.

句子中动词时态使用不当，'don't quite often things'结构不正确，应使用动词'sing'并调整频率副词的位置。此外，'talents'应为不可数名词'talent'，前面加上'a little bit of'。

× I sing very. Brad So I saw them saying.

✓ I sing very badly. So I stopped singing.

句子结构混乱，'Brad'应为副词'badly'，且后半句不完整，推测意为停止唱歌，需改为完整句子。

× No, I haven't learned how to sing 'cause. I'm not good as seen at first.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because I'm not good at singing at first.

'as seen'用法错误，应为'good at singing'，且句子时态应保持一致，表达过去的状态。

× Also I don't have the time and money to find the. Music T-shirt to tell me how to sing better.

✓ Also, I don't have the time and money to find a music teacher to tell me how to sing better.

'Music T-shirt'是错误的词汇，应为'music teacher'，且缺少冠词'a'。

× Well, I never think of this question but.

✓ Well, I have never thought of this question before.

'never think'时态错误，表达过去未曾考虑过，应使用现在完成时'have never thought'。

× Right now I think I want to sing for myself because I know that I'm ready. Bad for saying I don't want to.

✓ Right now I think I want to sing for myself because I know that I'm ready. Bad at singing, I don't want to...

'ready. Bad for saying'结构不通顺，应为'ready. Bad at singing'，表达自己唱歌不好。

× Sing for anyone else, Just sing for me is OK.

✓ I don't want to sing for anyone else, just singing for myself is OK.

句子缺少主语和谓语，且'just sing for me'表达不自然，应改为'just singing for myself'。

× Yes, I do believe that thing can bring us a lot of hapiness when I in spirit I'm at any time I would.

✓ Yes, I do believe that singing can bring us a lot of happiness. When I am in spirit, at any time I would...

'thing'应为'singing'，'hapiness'拼写错误，应为'happiness'。句子结构不完整，需分句表达。

× Open my iPhone hands, sing, pick up music that I like.

✓ Open my iPhone, sing, and play music that I like.

'Open my iPhone hands'表达错误，应为'Open my iPhone'，'pick up music'不合适，应为'play music'。

× In. Rick is the musics can relax myself and give me a peaceful time.

✓ Music can relax me and give me a peaceful time.

'musics'为不可数名词，不能复数，且句子结构混乱，应简化为'Music can relax me and give me a peaceful time.'。