Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在发音错误（将'singing'误说为'seeing'），影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意发音准确，同时回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复和语法错误。可以简洁明了地表达不喜欢唱歌的原因，并适当补充细节。

例: I don't like singing because I think my voice isn't very good. Also, my mother told me I wasn't good at singing when I was a child, so I feel shy singing in front of others.

提案: 回答中多次出现'sing'误说为'seen'，影响理解。建议注意发音和语法，句子结构应更简洁自然。可以直接回答是否学过唱歌，并说明原因和兴趣所在。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't enjoy it. Instead, I prefer playing the piano, which I find more interesting and relaxing.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但表达可以更自然流畅。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节，说明为什么只愿意为特定人群唱歌。

例: I would only sing a birthday song for my friends or family because I feel comfortable with them. In other situations, I prefer not to sing for anyone.

提案: 回答中多处发音和语法错误，句子不连贯，影响表达效果。建议加强发音练习，使用简单清晰的句子表达观点，并用连接词使内容连贯。

例: Definitely, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, singing a birthday song can make the person feel loved and joyful.

× Actually, I don't like seeing that much.

✓ Actually, I don't like singing that much.

这里的动词应该是'sing'的动名词形式'singing'，而不是'seeing'。'seeing'表示'看见'，与语境不符。

× Because I think my voice sound not very good and my mother told me that I am not go see when I was a child, so I feel a bit of shy when I see in front of others.

✓ Because I think my voice sounds not very good and my mother told me that I could not sing when I was a child, so I feel a bit shy when I sing in front of others.

主语是单数'sound'应改为'sounds'，'am not go see'语法错误，应改为'could not sing'，'feel a bit of shy'中'shy'是形容词，前面不需要'of'，'see in front of others'应为'sing in front of others'。

× Actually, I had never learned seen before because I don't enjoy seeing as I mentioned before.

✓ Actually, I have never learned to sing before because I don't enjoy singing as I mentioned before.

'had never learned seen'结构错误，应为'have never learned to sing'，'seeing'应为'singing'。

× Instead I prefer playing instrument like piano, which I found more interesting and relaxing.

✓ Instead I prefer playing instruments like the piano, which I find more interesting and relaxing.

'instrument'应为复数'instruments'，'found'时态应与现在时态'prefer'一致，改为'find'。

× So I decided to focus on playing learning piano rather than seeing.

✓ So I decided to focus on playing and learning piano rather than singing.

'playing learning'缺少连接词，应为'playing and learning'，'seeing'应为'singing'。

× I think I may sing a birthday song for my friends or family but in other situation I don't want to sing for anyone.

✓ I think I might sing a birthday song for my friends or family, but in other situations I don't want to sing for anyone.

'may'表示许可，'might'更适合表达可能性，'situation'应为复数'situations'。

× Definitely, I do believe that seeing a song can bring happiness to others.

✓ Definitely, I do believe that singing a song can bring happiness to others.

'seeing a song'应为'singing a song'，动词形式错误。

× And like birthday song, I think if way sing a birthday song too.

✓ And like a birthday song, I think if we sing a birthday song too,

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，'way'应为'we'，缺少冠词'a'。

× And while we loved is. Do can bring happy and happiness.

✓ And while we love it, it can bring happiness and joy.

句子不完整且语法错误，'loved'应为'love'，'Do can bring happy and happiness'语法错误，应改为'it can bring happiness and joy'。