Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和重复，句子应更连贯自然。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词使句子流畅。

例: No, I don't like singing because I think I'm not good at it and I'm afraid to sing in front of many people. However, I do enjoy singing when I'm stressed because it helps me relax.

提案: 回答应更清晰，避免语法错误和重复。应直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达学习经历。

例: I have never taken professional singing courses, but I did have some music classes at school where I learned basic singing techniques.

提案: 回答应更简洁明了，避免语法错误和重复。应直接表达想法，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I haven't really thought about it before, but if I had to sing for someone, I would sing for myself because it makes me feel happy and confident.

提案: 回答应更清晰，避免语法错误和重复。应用连贯的句子表达观点，并具体说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it creates a joyful atmosphere and helps people connect emotionally when they sing together.

× Why? No, actually I don't like singing because.

✓ No, actually I don't like singing because I think I'm not good at it.

句子结构不完整，because后面需要有完整的从句，说明原因。建议补充完整句子。

× I'm afraid to sing in front too many people.

✓ I'm afraid to sing in front of too many people.

短语中缺少介词of，正确表达是in front of，表示“在……面前”。

× I have never taken any professional courses tuner how to sing about I did have some music classes when I was at school, so I like to say that I.

✓ I have never taken any professional courses on how to sing, but I did have some music classes when I was at school, so I like to say that I...

介词使用错误，应该用on表示“关于某事的课程”。另外，句子中断，建议补充完整。

× I I learned to sing something hopeful that I don't know the singing skills.

✓ I learned to sing something, hopefully, but I don't know the singing skills well.

句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。需要调整词序和用词，使句子通顺。

× I have never seen thought about it before about it.

✓ I have never thought about it before.

错误使用了see和重复的about，正确表达是have never thought about it。

× If I had have to sing for someone, I'd like to say that I want to sing for myself because I think it's cool and I think we will feel happy.

✓ If I had to sing for someone, I'd say that I want to sing for myself because I think it's cool and I think we would feel happy.

虚拟语气中，条件句应使用had to，主句中would表示假设。时态和语气需一致。

× You can see for yourself an it's. Great.

✓ You can see for yourself, and it's great.

句子中an it's错误，应为and it's，连接两个分句。

× Actually, yes, I think listening can create some atmosphere that's.

✓ Actually, yes, I think singing can create some atmosphere that's...

根据上下文，应该是singing（唱歌）而非listening（听），代词使用错误。

× You can get many people involved in, they can fill this emotion and get your feeling when you are hearing hearing someone saying happy song and you can happily get involved in this land.

✓ You can get many people involved; they can feel this emotion and share your feelings when you hear someone singing a happy song, and you can happily join in.

句子结构混乱，重复用词，表达不清晰。需要调整句子结构和用词，使其通顺。

× You can help singing together.

✓ You can help by singing together.

动词help后面需要用介词by加动名词形式，表示通过某种方式帮助。